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One Acrostic Crap Write

Top 20 Bucket List Contest Entry

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This acrostic poem, ONE ACROSTIC CRAP WRITE, follows the vertical theme and imagines several goals that are hilarious to think about. I hope your neighbors house doesn't burn down as you could be an excellent suspect. Going back twenty years and founding Fanstory is the second thing I'd do with a time machine. The first is buy Microsoft in 1986 at $21 a share.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
    Lol. Yeah, I was going to say go back in time to create Google but I figured more folks would like FS. Thank you for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Bill. I really appreciate it, friend. I'm glad you liked my silly offering. Yes, fingers crossed his house doesn't go up in flames. Haha. Have a great weekend, Bill. Thank you again.

    Ron
Comment from rockmann
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Hands down the best entry, as well as the best I've read on FanStory in some time (other than my stories, of course). I chuckled more than a couple times, and said to myself, "Yeah, that's a great idea." It doesn't take a brain surgeon to write, but you could still be playing "Operation."

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
    Hahaha. That's for sure. Thank you for the fantastic review and big sixer, Rock. I really appreciate the generous rating and support, friend. I'm glad you a chuckle or two at this silliness. Have a great weekend and thank you again.

    Ron
Comment from Darlene Franklin
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What thought it must have taken to come up with this absurd list. How funny. I kind of like the idea of putting those fussy young children in the cargo hold. :) Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Darlene. Yes, I had to put a couple days of thinking into this one. Lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars, D. I'm glad you liked this silliness. have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Alchera
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Homouristically penned throughout its single versification acrostic structure layout and its cleverly outstanding narrative storylined content.Great job. Thank You for reading

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
    Thank you for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Alchera. I really appreciate the generous rating, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness. I hope you have a great weekend. Thank you again.

    Ron
reply by Alchera on 11-Jan-2020
    You arte always welcomed! Blessings from Italy
Comment from Cybertron1986
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Wow! What an unexpected read. I love the expression of your free thought. Not sure to what extent these could end up materializing, but I could imagine the dog being trained to fart on guests and imagining the gratification in the owner's face LOL

This piece truly breaks the boundaries of unscripted dialogue which would be equally as loved as the show, "Who's Line is it Anyways?" I miss that show and this piece brings me back. Wonderful and pleasant read!

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Yeah, I loved that show too. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Cybertron. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Well, Mystery Writer, one man's crap is another man's treasures! And I would have to say that there are more than one or two "gems" sparkling in your satirical offering! But I do believe you are going to need one heck of a huge island...

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Hahaha. That's for sure. Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Diane. I hope you have a wonderful new year.
Comment from Miranda Langston
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haha :D I love this poem and I especially love the reference to Mr. O'Hare. hehe :D I almost laughed out loud at the line about winning a Pulitzer for a drunken creation. I can totally relate :D keep up the excellent work. this is great :) six stars for creativity

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Miranda. I have to admit, I'm not real sure who Mr. O'Hare is. I looked him up on the internet and found an animated fellow. I'm surprised I don't know him. I try to watch all the animated movies because I always love a good laugh. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, M. I'm glad you liked my silly acrostic. Have a great new year. Thank you again.

    ;)
Comment from RShipp
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You have quite a creative bucket list. A few of them I would even consider putting on mine: 'creating a car that runs on roadkill' seems like a win-win, and 'stowing children in the cargo hold' could only be a plus for travel.

Good luck with the Top 20 Bucket List Contest.


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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Lol. Yeah, sometimes we need some peace and quiet on those flights. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, RShipp. I really appreciate it, friend. Have a great night.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Wow! LOL!!! If I thought you were even half serious, I would be sure never to be on a plane with you--and bring kids with me. I would be sure I never moved next door to you and them went on vacation . . .! Seriously, this
is SO clever and funny. You have a HUGE imagination.

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Janice. I really appreciate the generous stars for this silliness. I was just in one of those moods. Lol. Have a great night. Thank you again.
Comment from LyndaS
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How ridiculously funny this acrostic bucket list is. I needed a good chuckle this morning and this hit the spot. My favorite is lobbying for legislation to exile stupid people to their own island. Also liked going back in time and creating fanstory a year before Tom. This is a great effort and entry into this contest. Thanks for the laugh this morning! Lynda

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review and big sixer, Lynda. I dearly appreciate the precious review. Lol. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this ridiculous piece. I had a blast while writing it. Have a wonderful new year. Thank you again.