Night Terror
5-7-5 Nightmare Contest3 total reviews
Comment from Cybertron1986
This piece is intriguingly dark. It captures the reader's senses. The phrase, "frozen in dreaming torment" perfectly embodies the feel and fear of the darkest nightmares. Very well expressed as always!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
This piece is intriguingly dark. It captures the reader's senses. The phrase, "frozen in dreaming torment" perfectly embodies the feel and fear of the darkest nightmares. Very well expressed as always!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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:) thank you! They asked for nightmare and I gave them nightmare! Haha! Appreciate your feedback! xoxo
Comment from Ricky1024
"Night Terror'
Is a 5-7-5 Nightmare Writing Prompt Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Thanks for this, good luck, and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky and I 1024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
"Night Terror'
Is a 5-7-5 Nightmare Writing Prompt Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
....
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Thanks for this, good luck, and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky and I 1024
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you! I?ve been absorbed by the horror genre which I never thought I?d be writing!
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear author, a finely written poem with an illustration that complements this entry to perfection! Where did you find such a hideously grim picture? At least I know where you got the inspiration for this post.
Keep writing.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
Dear author, a finely written poem with an illustration that complements this entry to perfection! Where did you find such a hideously grim picture? At least I know where you got the inspiration for this post.
Keep writing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you! I got pic from Pinterest and had most written already, just tweaked it a little to really match the pic! Appreciate you took time to read!