Just Breathe
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Comment from dragonpoet
It is sad, that this sometimes happens and then breaks a relationship. If you can stop and think before you talk, the outcome can be changed. It is good advice.
Congrats on placing third in the contest, June
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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It is sad, that this sometimes happens and then breaks a relationship. If you can stop and think before you talk, the outcome can be changed. It is good advice.
Congrats on placing third in the contest, June
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much! Once something is said, it can't be taken back...
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You are most kindly welcome, June.
Joan
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This is a really great poem, and it's also good advice. I can see why this one would place in the contest. Congrats on that as well. I really liked this.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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This is a really great poem, and it's also good advice. I can see why this one would place in the contest. Congrats on that as well. I really liked this.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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THANK YOU!
Comment from royowen
One of my many follies in life has been leading with my tongue, I'm much better now, but occasionally I surrender to temptation... One needs to take a breath, be slow to speak, and quick to listen. Well done with these sage words and with gratitude, thank you June. Good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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One of my many follies in life has been leading with my tongue, I'm much better now, but occasionally I surrender to temptation... One needs to take a breath, be slow to speak, and quick to listen. Well done with these sage words and with gratitude, thank you June. Good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I?m glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you for sharing your insights!
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Welcome June
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh my goodness, yes!! ;) You are on a roll with this 'short gems', June! What a wonderful posting for a high school hallway or employee break room -- many less problems may occur if people could do this! ;) Thanx so much for your awesome offering and best of luck ! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Oh my goodness, yes!! ;) You are on a roll with this 'short gems', June! What a wonderful posting for a high school hallway or employee break room -- many less problems may occur if people could do this! ;) Thanx so much for your awesome offering and best of luck ! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I?m glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Teri7
June, This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem with some very good advice in it. You used very good descriptive words and the art work is beautiful. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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June, This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem with some very good advice in it. You used very good descriptive words and the art work is beautiful. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I?m glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this thought-provoking piece that gives good advice. Yes, a normal conversation can quickly turn into an argument no one will win!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this thought-provoking piece that gives good advice. Yes, a normal conversation can quickly turn into an argument no one will win!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I?m glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Diana L Crawford
How true is this statement which is often forgot - just to step back and take a breath when conversation reach a point of disagreement. I love the statement, Let's just agree to disagree! We are all unique individuals and we have our own views, so what's right to one may not be same for all! :) xoxo
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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How true is this statement which is often forgot - just to step back and take a breath when conversation reach a point of disagreement. I love the statement, Let's just agree to disagree! We are all unique individuals and we have our own views, so what's right to one may not be same for all! :) xoxo
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I?m glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this made me smile and sometimes we hear aggressive conversation that turns into a shouting match! If only everyone would take a deep big breath in, I liked your suggestion here June, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Ha ha ha, this made me smile and sometimes we hear aggressive conversation that turns into a shouting match! If only everyone would take a deep big breath in, I liked your suggestion here June, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Dolly. Very hard to write these shorter ones. Think it?s time to write another Awdl Sonnet...
Comment from JLR
A classic, June Sargeant 5-7-5 poetic winner! Perfect in each and every aspect of the submission. Perfect graphic with a perfect acknowledgment that words do matter and a pause can be a wise action.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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A classic, June Sargeant 5-7-5 poetic winner! Perfect in each and every aspect of the submission. Perfect graphic with a perfect acknowledgment that words do matter and a pause can be a wise action.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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I'm glad this piece resonated with you and I appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the parrots having a conversation that becomes a confrontation, have to stop and take a breath before they continue the conversation.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the parrots having a conversation that becomes a confrontation, have to stop and take a breath before they continue the conversation.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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I'm glad this piece resonated with you and I appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
