Paradigm Shift
And it all changed...18 total reviews
Comment from May 1
As always your writing is wonderful and you are able to express so many things without using too many words which I admire in poets. Also, I feel like the way you presented your poem is just right so even visually it looks great.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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As always your writing is wonderful and you are able to express so many things without using too many words which I admire in poets. Also, I feel like the way you presented your poem is just right so even visually it looks great.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, May -- this short ones make it more of a 'thinking game' in word choice.... and I do love a good game! :) Hope you have some sunshine today! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, this is a well written Cinquain, true to form with a good message. Good personification of innocence. Great painting of the bed.
Well done - good luck - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hello anon, this is a well written Cinquain, true to form with a good message. Good personification of innocence. Great painting of the bed.
Well done - good luck - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, Dorothy - very appreciated!
Comment from Minglement
Wow - this is a stunning entry for the cinquain contest with great accompanying artwork. Such a smooth read, with a poignant finish. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Wow - this is a stunning entry for the cinquain contest with great accompanying artwork. Such a smooth read, with a poignant finish. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Many thanks for your encouraging review!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Once this line is crossed, then, everything changes. Friendships can be lost this way or an enduring love gained. I like the message of this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Once this line is crossed, then, everything changes. Friendships can be lost this way or an enduring love gained. I like the message of this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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My thanks for your encouraging review, Jeffrey!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, hot! I love this, and it is serious contrast too, which always makes for a great read IMO. The form itself is pleasing when used correctly, but you have taken it to new heights!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Wow, hot! I love this, and it is serious contrast too, which always makes for a great read IMO. The form itself is pleasing when used correctly, but you have taken it to new heights!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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My thanks for your encouraging review, Dawn!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Intimacy certainly changes an innocent relationship and there is no turning back after that, I liked this unusual Cinquain and it touches a sensitive spot, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Intimacy certainly changes an innocent relationship and there is no turning back after that, I liked this unusual Cinquain and it touches a sensitive spot, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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My thanks for your encouraging review, Dolly!
Comment from Barbaraj1
An excellent entry for the cinquain poem. I find your poem interesting
and original. No, those two worlds never will be the same. Your picture
fits the poem perfectly.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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An excellent entry for the cinquain poem. I find your poem interesting
and original. No, those two worlds never will be the same. Your picture
fits the poem perfectly.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for your review!!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt.
This verse tells of passion and innocence lost.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt.
This verse tells of passion and innocence lost.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you! Your review is very appreciated, Sharon!
Comment from dragonpoet
Yvette,
This is a well written cinquain. It tells about how passion changes lives. It can change it in a good way if the passion changes to love and in a bad way if it doesn't.
Congrats on coming in second in the reviewer of the month contest
Good luck in the cinquain contest
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Yvette,
This is a well written cinquain. It tells about how passion changes lives. It can change it in a good way if the passion changes to love and in a bad way if it doesn't.
Congrats on coming in second in the reviewer of the month contest
Good luck in the cinquain contest
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Joan, and for your wonderful congrats and well wishes!! Much appreciated, my lady! ;)
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You are most kindly welcome on all accounts
My lord
Joan
Comment from Dancemom
This is a good entry for the cinquain poetry contest. I like your use of alliteration with crisp cotton. Your message describes the intense passion of love very well. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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This is a good entry for the cinquain poetry contest. I like your use of alliteration with crisp cotton. Your message describes the intense passion of love very well. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thanks! I appreciate your time!
