Seasons in Stereo
fabulous free versers club post for onomotopoeia26 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Joan, this is a very good free form poem that covers the seasons as well as incorporating all the onomotopoeia required by the club entry. The 'blink of an eye' is a good one. Also 'tick of a clock', Well thought out and a good read. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Hello Joan, this is a very good free form poem that covers the seasons as well as incorporating all the onomotopoeia required by the club entry. The 'blink of an eye' is a good one. Also 'tick of a clock', Well thought out and a good read. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Dorothy.
Joan
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is exemplary free verse poetry. It covers the different seasons well with illustrations that are sparse and creative. There is definitely a pattern of rhythm to this. It flows well and doesn't need to rhyme to get the point across. I like the phrase, "A Kodachrome world becomes black and white." I like the "tick" and the "tock" which symmetrically works well. Each stanza starts with a catchy phrase, "In a snap of a finger" and then, "In the blink of an eye," etc. There is shape and a formula to it and I find it easy to follow. Enjoyable to read and well written.
Take care, Jesse
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This is exemplary free verse poetry. It covers the different seasons well with illustrations that are sparse and creative. There is definitely a pattern of rhythm to this. It flows well and doesn't need to rhyme to get the point across. I like the phrase, "A Kodachrome world becomes black and white." I like the "tick" and the "tock" which symmetrically works well. Each stanza starts with a catchy phrase, "In a snap of a finger" and then, "In the blink of an eye," etc. There is shape and a formula to it and I find it easy to follow. Enjoyable to read and well written.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Jesse
Thanks for the thoruogh review. I am glad you liked the beginning lines of each stanza.
Joan
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Hello Joan.
I'm glad you liked my review. And, you are very welcome.
Jesse
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem with the use of onomatopoeia. Each season has its own unique sounds that we can identify with the season's characteristics.
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A very well-written free verse poem with the use of onomatopoeia. Each season has its own unique sounds that we can identify with the season's characteristics.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Sandra,
Thanks very much for the review
Joan
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! I think this is my favorite of all your poems, Joan! I love your great use of alliteration, onomatopoeia and the metaphorical description of the effect of time and nature on human life.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Wow! I think this is my favorite of all your poems, Joan! I love your great use of alliteration, onomatopoeia and the metaphorical description of the effect of time and nature on human life.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
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Lyenochka,
Thanks for the thorough and concise review. I am glad you liked it so much.
Joan
Comment from Raul1
This is a good poem. I have enjoyed reading this poem. I like this poem. All the lines rhyme. Very good work! It is good poetry. Thanks for sharing! Nice job.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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This is a good poem. I have enjoyed reading this poem. I like this poem. All the lines rhyme. Very good work! It is good poetry. Thanks for sharing! Nice job.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the positive and encouraging remarks.
dragonpoet
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You're welcome.
Comment from Tina Crute
Nice use of onomotopoeia. I especially like the theme of natures symphony of sounds. Then they rewind and replay. I never thought about it, but that's pretty accurate about nature, so good insight. Good job!
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Nice use of onomotopoeia. I especially like the theme of natures symphony of sounds. Then they rewind and replay. I never thought about it, but that's pretty accurate about nature, so good insight. Good job!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate both
I am glad you liked it
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Comment from susand3022
Hello Dragon, What a great job using all of that Onomatopoeia... I'm not sure I could have thought of them all! I had a fun time reading all of your nature sounds which will come around again, and again, and again... :)
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Hello Dragon, What a great job using all of that Onomatopoeia... I'm not sure I could have thought of them all! I had a fun time reading all of your nature sounds which will come around again, and again, and again... :)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly for the review and all the stars
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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Seasons in Stereo", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Seasons in Stereo", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Hey, Duchess.
I am honored by the six star rating. Thanks very much.
Joan
Hey Joan.
You certainly deserved the six,sparkling star rating.......
the Duchess
Comment from Barbaraj1
I like your poem very much! It's well written and flows well.
Seasons change quickly. I love the way you start each stanza with a blink of an eye snap of the finger.
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I like your poem very much! It's well written and flows well.
Seasons change quickly. I love the way you start each stanza with a blink of an eye snap of the finger.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thanks for noting the methods telling time
I appreiciate the review
dragonpoet
Comment from Ben Colder
Interesting free verse. All in a split second it happens. Wow. Much like life. One day you are young, the next you are old. Best to you in your poetry challange. I find nothing wrong. Thanks for sharing
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Interesting free verse. All in a split second it happens. Wow. Much like life. One day you are young, the next you are old. Best to you in your poetry challange. I find nothing wrong. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review and for the best wishes.
Joan
