Moonlight and Music
A healing combination...3 total reviews
Comment from diamondbogle
hmmmmm I like this. I get a little bit of a creepy vibe, which I'm not sure was the goal but its what I'm feeling. I liked how simple it is but yet emotional. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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hmmmmm I like this. I get a little bit of a creepy vibe, which I'm not sure was the goal but its what I'm feeling. I liked how simple it is but yet emotional. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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:). Oh my no it wasn?t supposed to be creepy, but I can see what your saying. Thank ms though very much for stopping to read! xoxo
Comment from Mackenzie Schmidt
Your poem Moonlight and Music was well written fit the 5-7-5 syllable structure . The picture from the poem intensified the message and imagery. It was different from may of the contest submissions for the contest that iv'e seen.
Well Done!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Your poem Moonlight and Music was well written fit the 5-7-5 syllable structure . The picture from the poem intensified the message and imagery. It was different from may of the contest submissions for the contest that iv'e seen.
Well Done!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much! I love these contests because they make me think a little harder to come up with something a little different! Appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have successfully fullfilled the requirements of the competition, but in addition you have stuffed the poem with alliteration. This works extremely well, providing melody to the text - most appropriate in a text about music at night.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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You have successfully fullfilled the requirements of the competition, but in addition you have stuffed the poem with alliteration. This works extremely well, providing melody to the text - most appropriate in a text about music at night.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much, Katherine! I am honored you appreciated this so much! I love doing these kinds of contests! They challenge me to think more creatively! Have a blessed Sunday! xoxo
