Moonlight Magic
5 7 5 on Night10 total reviews
Comment from Diana L Crawford
I'm glad to know this was your work! I love everything moon and water, so this was one of my very favorites! The picture is stunning also! It really brings your words to life!
xoxo
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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I'm glad to know this was your work! I love everything moon and water, so this was one of my very favorites! The picture is stunning also! It really brings your words to life!
xoxo
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thank you! Glad you liked this short one.
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absolutely! xoxo
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. This is a beautiful 5-7-5 entry. I love 5 syllable words for the last line, it always gives more impact. Good luck!
Enjoy your weekend. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Hello there, my friend. This is a beautiful 5-7-5 entry. I love 5 syllable words for the last line, it always gives more impact. Good luck!
Enjoy your weekend. ~Kerry
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this short piece!
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:)))
Comment from The Winter Bard
fantastic imagery in this one set to a perfect companion image. The tidal pull of the moon at night has been translated well into your verses. Love the final 5 syllables being one eloquent word. Well done and best of luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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fantastic imagery in this one set to a perfect companion image. The tidal pull of the moon at night has been translated well into your verses. Love the final 5 syllables being one eloquent word. Well done and best of luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from zlp22
Great picture. You can always count on the moon rising. Nightfall is always a quiet time, many people do not like the dark but to me it means a day is gone and tomorrow will be better. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Great picture. You can always count on the moon rising. Nightfall is always a quiet time, many people do not like the dark but to me it means a day is gone and tomorrow will be better. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights!
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading this playful verse you have entered into the contest. Excellent art and theme. The use of a single word as the satori is perfect and succinct. Makes a great impact. Well done and good luck!
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed reading this playful verse you have entered into the contest. Excellent art and theme. The use of a single word as the satori is perfect and succinct. Makes a great impact. Well done and good luck!
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Appreciate your encouraging and insightful sentiments- as usual!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a lovely entry for the 5-7-5 Night writing prompt.
This short verse describes the moon rising and the artwork is beautiful.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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I think this is a lovely entry for the 5-7-5 Night writing prompt.
This short verse describes the moon rising and the artwork is beautiful.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the night contest
with the nice addition of a rhyme
an excellent creation of a mood.
Very well done with excellent art work to match
Best wishes to you
Robert
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the night contest
with the nice addition of a rhyme
an excellent creation of a mood.
Very well done with excellent art work to match
Best wishes to you
Robert
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging and generous feedback!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your magical words and wonder if the last word should not be (irresistibly), as I think it would fit better, but it is your poem, this is just a suggestion, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed your magical words and wonder if the last word should not be (irresistibly), as I think it would fit better, but it is your poem, this is just a suggestion, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Glad you liked this short piece - they?re usually more difficult to write!
Comment from RodG
Your title says it all! Indeed there's "moonlight magic" when one is in the company of a winsome lass who "teases and entices." Your 5-7-5 makes it easy for us to visualize the flirtation in this scene. Good luck in the contest. Rod
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Your title says it all! Indeed there's "moonlight magic" when one is in the company of a winsome lass who "teases and entices." Your 5-7-5 makes it easy for us to visualize the flirtation in this scene. Good luck in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thanks for sharing your insightful comments! The moon does enchant like a woman, while the sun struts his stuff like a man! lol
Comment from Fonda Little
I really like the picture you used with the poem and the word usage of the poem itself! Great job! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
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I really like the picture you used with the poem and the word usage of the poem itself! Great job! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
