Cloud-Watching
Pretty sure Grandma was right all along...50 total reviews
Comment from May 1
Wonderful poem! I especially love the beginning and the imagery that you use all through out the poem. I don't think that people appreciate clouds enough and I am so glad that some do. All in all, I really enjoyed this poem.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Wonderful poem! I especially love the beginning and the imagery that you use all through out the poem. I don't think that people appreciate clouds enough and I am so glad that some do. All in all, I really enjoyed this poem.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining the show, May! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from ruzu27
I very often do cloudwatching and so I know what you are talking about.
Your poem is very well written and what I especially like is that you have mentioned various kinds of those fluffy "things". This ensures that poeple
who to this moment where neither cloud lovers nor cloud haters, will probably belong to the first group, after having read your poem.Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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I very often do cloudwatching and so I know what you are talking about.
Your poem is very well written and what I especially like is that you have mentioned various kinds of those fluffy "things". This ensures that poeple
who to this moment where neither cloud lovers nor cloud haters, will probably belong to the first group, after having read your poem.Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Wow!! What a wonderful review, Pam -- thank you so much!! ;) It was my chance to make 'nerdy' sound fun, ya know?!! :) Hope a smile finds you today, my friend -- take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Leon-Gonzalez
This piece is absolutely awesome. You have painted such a vivid picture with your chosen words. I was transfixed in a gaze at the skies after reading this beautiful piece. You are such an inspirational writer. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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This piece is absolutely awesome. You have painted such a vivid picture with your chosen words. I was transfixed in a gaze at the skies after reading this beautiful piece. You are such an inspirational writer. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Oh, Sandra, thank THANK YOU for those lovely stars, my lady, and thanks so much for joining the show! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. Hope you are fully recovered and back into the swing of life, my friend!! ;) Blessings! ;)
Comment from Susan X Smith
I can see why this poem won the contest with its engaging phrases and a rhyme scheme that works so well. It is well written and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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I can see why this poem won the contest with its engaging phrases and a rhyme scheme that works so well. It is well written and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed my clouds, Susan -- they were the first object of my imagination way back in childhood so this was a fun one! ;) Thanx and have a great rest of the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from RShipp
I enjoyed how you included the all the types of clouds in your cloud poem. Well done!
I enjoyed your poem.
Best of luck with the nephophiles' competition.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed how you included the all the types of clouds in your cloud poem. Well done!
I enjoyed your poem.
Best of luck with the nephophiles' competition.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thanx for your review, R! ;)
Comment from bob cullen
Who knew clouds could present such images. I guess Mother Nature has the same effect on people. To me, this poem gives the reader the opportunity to see inside the writer's imagination. And that, again to me reveals a writer, and a viewer who sees beauty in everything.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Who knew clouds could present such images. I guess Mother Nature has the same effect on people. To me, this poem gives the reader the opportunity to see inside the writer's imagination. And that, again to me reveals a writer, and a viewer who sees beauty in everything.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for your awesome review on this one, Bob, and most certainly thank you for that shining cross that follows the five stars!! ;) Clouds were the first fascination of this little girl's over-active imagination so this was a fun one! ;) Take care out there and have a wonderful year again! ;) Yvette
Comment from diamondbogle
I really really really loved this. 6 stars to you! I just loved the imagery I got with it, I had this whole story in my mind with your words. This one was just really well done! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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I really really really loved this. 6 stars to you! I just loved the imagery I got with it, I had this whole story in my mind with your words. This one was just really well done! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Oh, Diamond, thank THANK YOU for those lovely stars, my lady, and thanks so much for joining the show! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from clsandau
"This is a very interesting poem. You've certainly covered and enjoyed all types of clouds. I live in the country and love watching cloud formations. Your words run very smoothly and the picture is delightful. I love your invite to watch the show - so very true. Thanks for sharing the poem. Carol
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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"This is a very interesting poem. You've certainly covered and enjoyed all types of clouds. I live in the country and love watching cloud formations. Your words run very smoothly and the picture is delightful. I love your invite to watch the show - so very true. Thanks for sharing the poem. Carol
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining the cloud show!! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
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You are welcome and I will enjoy! Carol
Comment from Louise Michelle
This was very entertaining and I love how you invite the reader to use her imagination as well when gazing at the clouds.
Your presentation is terrific and I enjoyed your choice of rhyming words. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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This was very entertaining and I love how you invite the reader to use her imagination as well when gazing at the clouds.
Your presentation is terrific and I enjoyed your choice of rhyming words. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining the show, Ronni! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Good to see your face again!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gail Denham
Nice look at the sky - and I love the image you chose it goes well with your poem. The sky holds all kinds of surprises, exciting views, snow, rain, etc. Good poem
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Nice look at the sky - and I love the image you chose it goes well with your poem. The sky holds all kinds of surprises, exciting views, snow, rain, etc. Good poem
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining the show, Gail! :) This one was my fun mix of science and fantasy with a touch of spiritual... so glad you enjoyed the combination!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. I'm sitting in teacher workshop right now... think about me!! LOL!! :) ;)
