2020 Vision
Start the New Year with a clear conscious23 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"2020 Vision", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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"2020 Vision", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Happy New Year, Dear Duchess, Thanks you, for your thoughtful support of my work, Laura xo
Dear Laura,
you have a Happy New Year too.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess xo
Comment from RShipp
Many people do see great results- maybe- from reassessing their lives once a year.
But 'forgiving daily' would make a much better life!
Best of luck in the 20 syllable contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Many people do see great results- maybe- from reassessing their lives once a year.
But 'forgiving daily' would make a much better life!
Best of luck in the 20 syllable contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review, Happy New Year.
Comment from Therese Caron
Great 20 Syllable New Year poem. It's a poem with great advice, which we should all live by. Nice image and quote also. I think this is a good entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Great 20 Syllable New Year poem. It's a poem with great advice, which we should all live by. Nice image and quote also. I think this is a good entry for the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thanks Therese, your review and stars are appreciated.
Comment from susand3022
You're so right, saying, "I'm sorry," doesn't cost a thing. The first thing that came to mind when I read your poem was the song from Godspell... Day by Day. Do you remember that song? I know you're right, you have to at least try to be able to forgive in order to move forward. I know for some, who have been through terrible things, this isn't always easy. You also sometimes have to forgive yourself. Just like you have to love yourself before you can really love someone else. Nice poem :)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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You're so right, saying, "I'm sorry," doesn't cost a thing. The first thing that came to mind when I read your poem was the song from Godspell... Day by Day. Do you remember that song? I know you're right, you have to at least try to be able to forgive in order to move forward. I know for some, who have been through terrible things, this isn't always easy. You also sometimes have to forgive yourself. Just like you have to love yourself before you can really love someone else. Nice poem :)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Hi Susan, I heard that song in my mind as I wrote it, you are the 2nd person that picked up on that. How cool is that? Thank you for your thoughtful review. Have you ever watched Joyce Meyers, she was abused as a child and had to forgive her father to move on and with God's help she did. Hers is an amazing story.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 20 Syllable New Year Poem contest.
This short verse tells of seeing clearly and holding dear ones.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 20 Syllable New Year Poem contest.
This short verse tells of seeing clearly and holding dear ones.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thanks Sharon, God bless.
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-syllable poem, 2020 Vision, has the correct syllable count and urges the readers to seek out those who have done us wrong and forgive them. We can't expect it if we can't extend it.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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This twenty-syllable poem, 2020 Vision, has the correct syllable count and urges the readers to seek out those who have done us wrong and forgive them. We can't expect it if we can't extend it.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you Bill, Your comments and review are appreciated.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your rhyming five-syllable lines! I especially liked the call to forgive and to hold others as precious as a way to live daily, not just at certain times of the year. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Great job with your rhyming five-syllable lines! I especially liked the call to forgive and to hold others as precious as a way to live daily, not just at certain times of the year. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank so very much. ^_^
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I love it, Laura! In the air of Godspell's Day-by-Day, the lines just work so beautifully together! ;) Great monorhyme offering for the contest, my lady, with the final line being the perfect parting thought!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Oh, I love it, Laura! In the air of Godspell's Day-by-Day, the lines just work so beautifully together! ;) Great monorhyme offering for the contest, my lady, with the final line being the perfect parting thought!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Thanks Yvette, I could hear that song when I wrote it, amazing you picked up on that. xo
Comment from Mark D. R.
You established a good mantra for the New Year! I applaud your attitude and your rhymes!
"Forgive sincerely" (my best of your 4 lines!) should be the active byword for certain of our country's leaders IMHO.
Best wishes in this contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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You established a good mantra for the New Year! I applaud your attitude and your rhymes!
"Forgive sincerely" (my best of your 4 lines!) should be the active byword for certain of our country's leaders IMHO.
Best wishes in this contest.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Thank for your insightful comments and review. ^_^
Comment from Ricky1024
This 20 Syllable Contest Entry was rich in Theme as well as Imagery.
A Great subject for a New Year and Decade.
No Grammar Errors.
Flowed and read well also.
Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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This 20 Syllable Contest Entry was rich in Theme as well as Imagery.
A Great subject for a New Year and Decade.
No Grammar Errors.
Flowed and read well also.
Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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thanks very much Ricky.
