2020 Vision
Start the New Year with a clear conscious23 total reviews
Comment from May 1
I love this poem, it's so well-written and it sends a great message out into the world. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem, it is very powerful and fun to read.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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I love this poem, it's so well-written and it sends a great message out into the world. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem, it is very powerful and fun to read.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from June Sargent
Daily challenge- to forgive and forget others and appreciate one another for their good points. We don't have to wait another year to mend relationships. Well said.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Daily challenge- to forgive and forget others and appreciate one another for their good points. We don't have to wait another year to mend relationships. Well said.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you, June, Your review and stars are appreciated.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely, well written and truthful poem you have penned. In order for us to be forgiven by our Heavenly Father we have to forgive as you said. Thank you for sharing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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This is a very lovely, well written and truthful poem you have penned. In order for us to be forgiven by our Heavenly Father we have to forgive as you said. Thank you for sharing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Dear Teri, I appreciate your time and comments. The six stars I am honored.
Comment from Pantygynt
You certainly have the correct number of syllables, five on each of four lines, amounting to twenty in all and, although the New Year is not actually mentioned in the poem, it reads like a sound New Year's resolution to me.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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You certainly have the correct number of syllables, five on each of four lines, amounting to twenty in all and, although the New Year is not actually mentioned in the poem, it reads like a sound New Year's resolution to me.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for your review and astute comments.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Love your poem. You're absolutely right. Prayer is so needed. Forgiveness is so necessary, too. If we didn't have either in the world today, the world would be in a horrible state of mind.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Love your poem. You're absolutely right. Prayer is so needed. Forgiveness is so necessary, too. If we didn't have either in the world today, the world would be in a horrible state of mind.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thank you Rosemary, for your review and six stars! God bless you.
Comment from Gail Denham
Well done and a good message for sure. Forgive, love. This morning my husband and I lead an elementary Sunday School class - the chosen story is I Cor. 13 - the Love chapter. Hard to explain this - when kids do have problems just like us - and bullies.
Hoping to get participation from the kids.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Well done and a good message for sure. Forgive, love. This morning my husband and I lead an elementary Sunday School class - the chosen story is I Cor. 13 - the Love chapter. Hard to explain this - when kids do have problems just like us - and bullies.
Hoping to get participation from the kids.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your comments and six stars. I appreciate it so much. The children will remember the love and acceptance they felt from you both, you are the love and example. God Bless.
Comment from Sally Law
A wonderful offering, dear Laura. I seldom give sixes for a short poem, but this was simply stated, both a poem and a prayer for 2020.
Sending you my best today as always, and six stars to bless you,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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A wonderful offering, dear Laura. I seldom give sixes for a short poem, but this was simply stated, both a poem and a prayer for 2020.
Sending you my best today as always, and six stars to bless you,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Awh, thanks so much Sally I appreciate your support of my work and the six stars. God Bless you, Laura xo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image, quote, and
presentation, Laura.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You have used your 20
syllables well with a good
topic and effective rhyme.
-The meter is also good,
and the message is a
good one to remind us
to be kind all year round.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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-Nice image, quote, and
presentation, Laura.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You have used your 20
syllables well with a good
topic and effective rhyme.
-The meter is also good,
and the message is a
good one to remind us
to be kind all year round.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much, Pam. I appreciate your comments.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the 20 syllable new year poem contest. Your syllable count is correct. You have provided very important advice for the new year about the importance of forgiveness. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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This is a great entry for the 20 syllable new year poem contest. Your syllable count is correct. You have provided very important advice for the new year about the importance of forgiveness. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thanks Heather, Your opinion matters to me.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty syllable poem about forgiveness that is the key to find joy in your heart and peace on your mind. Many times we neglect to forgive ourselves too and we still burdened with bitterness.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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A very well-written twenty syllable poem about forgiveness that is the key to find joy in your heart and peace on your mind. Many times we neglect to forgive ourselves too and we still burdened with bitterness.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much Sandra, I appreciate your reviews.
