Love Long Distance
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Comment from damommy
Your chapter is interesting. I like the way both characters' POV comes across in the different sections. I think Bill will love Cathy's news about their baby.
I know she will love Bill's poem that he will tell her on the phone. I'm worried about Grandpa--he's such a force in this novel.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Your chapter is interesting. I like the way both characters' POV comes across in the different sections. I think Bill will love Cathy's news about their baby.
I know she will love Bill's poem that he will tell her on the phone. I'm worried about Grandpa--he's such a force in this novel.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Hi Yvonne! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 17 of Love Long Distance. We both really appreciate you following along. Thank you also for pointing out that you liked how the characters' POVs come across. Yes, we agree - Grandpa is a such a force in this novel. We'll see what happens next. Chapter 18 is rolling out as I write this. Have a wonderful week. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Commando
WOW! In four words, "An awesome presentation, Cathy." Co-authoring with you is a prestigious honor. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Bill.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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WOW! In four words, "An awesome presentation, Cathy." Co-authoring with you is a prestigious honor. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Bill.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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It is "WOW" because of YOU! Thank you for the awesome six star rating. Writing with you is a dream come true! Best wishes and God bless you, too!
Respectfully with Love and Admiration,
Cathy
Comment from susand3022
Hi Bill and Cathy, I'm not as anxious about grandpa as I am about Bill finding out about the baby! She hasn't told him yet about the little butterflies in her belly! That will be fun! I'm all about the good times I guess :)
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Hi Bill and Cathy, I'm not as anxious about grandpa as I am about Bill finding out about the baby! She hasn't told him yet about the little butterflies in her belly! That will be fun! I'm all about the good times I guess :)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Hi Susan, Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We won't tell Grandpa you are more concerned about the baby! :) Yes, Cathy will tell Bill as soon as she can. Poor Grandpa, though... Stay tuned. Chapter 18 is in the works and coming soon. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Tina Crute
No...I wasn't ready for that chapter to end! Once I got the hang of the team's font and real life font, I breezed through this! So good! I need to bookmark you!
Tina
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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No...I wasn't ready for that chapter to end! Once I got the hang of the team's font and real life font, I breezed through this! So good! I need to bookmark you!
Tina
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Awww....so sweet of you, Tina! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We are happy to know you enjoyed this and will be following along. Chapters 1-17 are available here, and Chapter 18 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you all the best in 2020! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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I wish y'all the best also!
I don't read many stories on
here but thought I'd try yours.
All the best to you two,
Tina
Comment from Ulla
Hi there to both of you. So you have a lot of premonition in this well written chapter. Grandpa seems to be beyond saving and a new life is on its way. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Hi there to both of you. So you have a lot of premonition in this well written chapter. Grandpa seems to be beyond saving and a new life is on its way. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Hi Ulla! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, thank you for your continued support. Yes, a lot going on right now in the book! Stay tuned--Chapter 18 is in the works and coming soon. All the best to you, too! Happy New Year and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Teri7
This is another very good chapter you two have written and posted for us to read. I can't wait to read the next chapter to find out about grandpa and see if he is alright. You used very good descriptive words and dialogue. Look forward to next chapter you guys! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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This is another very good chapter you two have written and posted for us to read. I can't wait to read the next chapter to find out about grandpa and see if he is alright. You used very good descriptive words and dialogue. Look forward to next chapter you guys! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Hi Teri! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, thank you for your continued support. We are happy you are enjoying the book and you're looking forward to the next chapter. (Poor Grandpa!) It is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you all the best in 2020. Love and Blessings!
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill and Cathy
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Hope you both had a good Christmas and Happy New Year. I have been off the site so am catching up with all the books I've been reading. Oh dear. I do hope for the miracle for grandpa. Looking forward to the next chapter. Rox
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Hope you both had a good Christmas and Happy New Year. I have been off the site so am catching up with all the books I've been reading. Oh dear. I do hope for the miracle for grandpa. Looking forward to the next chapter. Rox
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Hi Rox! Welcome back! We understand about catching up. With the holidays especially, it can get overwhelming. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Your support means a great deal to us. Glad you are looking forward to the next chapter. Let's hope for that miracle! It is currently in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful 2020! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Oh, no, Grandpa's their rock! You're being mean to your characters. (And that's your right and responsibility.) However, I think they both have absorbed a lot of his strength and are ready to go on alone if necessary.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Oh, no, Grandpa's their rock! You're being mean to your characters. (And that's your right and responsibility.) However, I think they both have absorbed a lot of his strength and are ready to go on alone if necessary.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Hi Darlene! Yes, Grandpa is their rock. We'll see what happens next. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, thank you for your continued support. It means so much to both of us. Chapter 18 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you all the best in 2020! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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You're most welcome. I appreciate your support of my work as well.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You sure did leave the ending hanging, but that's what makes a good story great! Now we have two things to have us in awe! Grandpa and the fact you feel butterflies fluttering. Onto the next chapter...love the story!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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You sure did leave the ending hanging, but that's what makes a good story great! Now we have two things to have us in awe! Grandpa and the fact you feel butterflies fluttering. Onto the next chapter...love the story!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Hi Rosemary! So glad you continue to love our story! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Your continued support means so much to us. Chapter 18 is already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you all the best in 2020! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm so sorry I'm out of sixes, that was so sad. Poor Bill is going to be devasted to learn his premonition might be coming true. I remember when my grandpa died, I didn't forgive him for weeks for leaving us to go to Heaven. I know I was being silly, but it hit me hard not to have him around anymore. What will Bill do now? And Cathy, she is pregnant, she has to be careful. My word, what an emotional chapter this is. I can't wait to read the next part. Superb writing, as usual. :)) Happy New Year to both of you. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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I'm so sorry I'm out of sixes, that was so sad. Poor Bill is going to be devasted to learn his premonition might be coming true. I remember when my grandpa died, I didn't forgive him for weeks for leaving us to go to Heaven. I know I was being silly, but it hit me hard not to have him around anymore. What will Bill do now? And Cathy, she is pregnant, she has to be careful. My word, what an emotional chapter this is. I can't wait to read the next part. Superb writing, as usual. :)) Happy New Year to both of you. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Hi Sandra! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this. Also, for your continued support. It means so very much to both of us! As for the sixth star, no worries! That beautiful smile on your profile picture is worth a thousand stars! Your comments are awesome, and we really appreciate you sharing about your grandpa. Glad you found this chapter superb. We are already working on Chapter 18, and it'll be posted soon. Happy New Year from both of us to you, too! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy