Fly Fishing
A true adventure on every fly-fishing outing27 total reviews
Comment from Fonda Little
I love the imagery portrayed in this poem! Great job! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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I love the imagery portrayed in this poem! Great job! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you Fonda, blessings back at you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You have probably followed the form given in the example for the Rondel for the contest, but for me the meter is spasmodic and the words don't flow. However I did love the sentiments here.
I think you need an apostrophe before (cross) in the third line.
Good luck,
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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You have probably followed the form given in the example for the Rondel for the contest, but for me the meter is spasmodic and the words don't flow. However I did love the sentiments here.
I think you need an apostrophe before (cross) in the third line.
Good luck,
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your input, Dolly always regarded with greatest respect.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a lovely rondel poem about fishing. Fishing is such a peaceful activity, although I'm not very good at it. This is well written and your rhyming pattern is correct. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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This is a lovely rondel poem about fishing. Fishing is such a peaceful activity, although I'm not very good at it. This is well written and your rhyming pattern is correct. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Heather, thank you.
Comment from Tina Crute
You have worded a great poem! I love the beginning and ending the most and will remember those lines.. I love that you casted and then relished the breeze. The tone of your poem is relaxing!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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You have worded a great poem! I love the beginning and ending the most and will remember those lines.. I love that you casted and then relished the breeze. The tone of your poem is relaxing!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Tina, thank you!
Comment from Bichon
I don't personally fish myself, but your poem seems to capture the essence of it and you have described it in an understandable and interesting way! The photo is lovely too!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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I don't personally fish myself, but your poem seems to capture the essence of it and you have described it in an understandable and interesting way! The photo is lovely too!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Bichon, thank you very much for the review and comments.
Comment from BeasPeas
Your poem is tranquil and well described. It brings back the memory of when my dad took me fishing. Just the two of us in the boat to spend hours on the lake. Nice job. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Your poem is tranquil and well described. It brings back the memory of when my dad took me fishing. Just the two of us in the boat to spend hours on the lake. Nice job. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Marilyn, thank you have a great 2020!
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend, this is a fantastic Rondell entry. You brought the excitement of fishing alive, it was invigorating. I love fishing, never did fly fishing though. Good luck and have a wonderful new year.
~Kerry
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Hello there, my friend, this is a fantastic Rondell entry. You brought the excitement of fishing alive, it was invigorating. I love fishing, never did fly fishing though. Good luck and have a wonderful new year.
~Kerry
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Kerry, thank you have a great 2020!
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You're welcome:))
Comment from Ben Colder
Your fly fishing poem got my attention as I love fly fishing the little Red River here in our state. Such a thrill learning the adventure. Thanks for sharing your talent..
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Your fly fishing poem got my attention as I love fly fishing the little Red River here in our state. Such a thrill learning the adventure. Thanks for sharing your talent..
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Ben, thank you have a great 2020!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. You've written a nice, style correct rondel poem regarding a subject I know nothing about. Many people have told me how euphoric fly-fishing is. Your narrative throughout depicts a paradise standing in the water flow. It almost makes me wish I had done it at least once. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Hello mystery writer. You've written a nice, style correct rondel poem regarding a subject I know nothing about. Many people have told me how euphoric fly-fishing is. Your narrative throughout depicts a paradise standing in the water flow. It almost makes me wish I had done it at least once. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Robert, thank you for your review and comments.
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You're welcome
Comment from bhogg
Sometimes the format seems to slow down and make the poem look forced. Not so with yours. Looks like it fits the requirement and is a lovely poem with wonderful imagery. Bill
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Sometimes the format seems to slow down and make the poem look forced. Not so with yours. Looks like it fits the requirement and is a lovely poem with wonderful imagery. Bill
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Bill Thank you for your review and comments, I am grateful!
