Over-sized And Under-loved
5-7-5 - There's someone for every one.21 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Lisa,
What a perfect romantic want ad. It shows someone ready for love and also the effect being overweight has on a life sometimes.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
Joan
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Lisa,
What a perfect romantic want ad. It shows someone ready for love and also the effect being overweight has on a life sometimes.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
Comment from Minglement
What a unique entry for this contest. Cute illustration for your sad commentary. Clever how it reads like an ad for lonely hearts. Well done. I see why it placed well. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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What a unique entry for this contest. Cute illustration for your sad commentary. Clever how it reads like an ad for lonely hearts. Well done. I see why it placed well. Congratulations.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your supportive comments.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Carl DeVere
Well done Word Mistress! I loved this and see why it deserves a ribbon. If you can both make me laugh and impress me with a double entendre in a 5-7-5 attempt--that's talent!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Well done Word Mistress! I loved this and see why it deserves a ribbon. If you can both make me laugh and impress me with a double entendre in a 5-7-5 attempt--that's talent!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your comments, Carl. Much appreciated.
Comment from Tina Crute
How in the world did I miss this? I usually get all your stuff. Congratulations on your win! This is so cute!
I like the 'sighs' homophone for size!
Hugs, Tina
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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How in the world did I miss this? I usually get all your stuff. Congratulations on your win! This is so cute!
I like the 'sighs' homophone for size!
Hugs, Tina
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your comments, Tina!
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You are so, so welcome, friend! Sorry I missed it earlier!
Tina
Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on having your 5-7-5 so well received in the competition. I enjoyed your vivid description and use of alliteration to intensify the message. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Congratulations on having your 5-7-5 so well received in the competition. I enjoyed your vivid description and use of alliteration to intensify the message. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your comments, Joan!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Over-sized and Under-loved, has the right set up and finds the jolly jiggly girl in search of the man who can appreciate true girth.
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This 5-7-5, Over-sized and Under-loved, has the right set up and finds the jolly jiggly girl in search of the man who can appreciate true girth.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
Comment from patcelaw
I found thhis to be a clever and funny poem. May the blessings of the Lord flow over you in the new year. Happy New Year.
Patricia
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I found thhis to be a clever and funny poem. May the blessings of the Lord flow over you in the new year. Happy New Year.
Patricia
Comment Written 01-Jan-2020
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a great 5-7-5 poem, and a very funny one also.I like the play on words, she seeks man for her sighs, and the problem is her size! He looks about the same size she is, so maybe they can make this new romantic love work. After all, we don't want to see her wobbling woefully forever! Great poem, great fun.
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This is a great 5-7-5 poem, and a very funny one also.I like the play on words, she seeks man for her sighs, and the problem is her size! He looks about the same size she is, so maybe they can make this new romantic love work. After all, we don't want to see her wobbling woefully forever! Great poem, great fun.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
Comment from Patty Palmer
How cute is that? But she's not fat! She's weightfully challenged! More bounce to the ounce! He looks to be in about the same category. But you're right! There is someone for everyone!
Patty
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How cute is that? But she's not fat! She's weightfully challenged! More bounce to the ounce! He looks to be in about the same category. But you're right! There is someone for everyone!
Patty
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! You just can't help make puns ! Instead of a man her "size" she needs a cure for her "sighs"and you used alliteration quite effectively! Best wishes in the contest!
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Lol! You just can't help make puns ! Instead of a man her "size" she needs a cure for her "sighs"and you used alliteration quite effectively! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019