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Aiona's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 71 "Block"
Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from Janilou
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I always enjoy reading work that makes me think. This one is no exception.

in nautical terms
a block is not a toy cube
it is a pulley

I must admit, my mind immediately turned to the idea of a mental block rather than a physical one.

Very well done. Thanks for making me think,

Jan

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    LOL! That is another definition I didn't think of! I love it!
Comment from papa55mike
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Interesting concept! This little poem is wonderfully written, and I love the picture. Best of luck with your writing.

Good luck in the contest!
Happy Holidays and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    Thank you, Mike.