Bottoms up
New Year's toast to us. Our future starts now3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I loved it. Your words were very upbeat and they send a positive message to everyone. Nice job.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I loved it. Your words were very upbeat and they send a positive message to everyone. Nice job.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Many thanks Sandra
Comment from RodG
A very timely toast, very well expressed in seven syllables. I like the reference to OUR future as this suggests you are speaking to everyone, even strangers. Many thanks for including me.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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A very timely toast, very well expressed in seven syllables. I like the reference to OUR future as this suggests you are speaking to everyone, even strangers. Many thanks for including me.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Lovely review. Thanks Rod
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
very timely. However, I always find formats such as the 2-3-2 or 5-7-5 poems complex when the thought transcends the line, and is broken up on the next one. And yet I am guilty myself of this. It might be preferable to save this for a one or two liner prompt, and search harder for a 2-3-2 that flows better (just a thought).
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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very timely. However, I always find formats such as the 2-3-2 or 5-7-5 poems complex when the thought transcends the line, and is broken up on the next one. And yet I am guilty myself of this. It might be preferable to save this for a one or two liner prompt, and search harder for a 2-3-2 that flows better (just a thought).
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thanks for the review
