Reviews from

Ethereal Illustrator

A 2-3-2 Poetry Offering

21 total reviews 
Comment from May 1
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That is so wonderfully said and I love that idea. It sounds simply wonderful. All in all, it was a true pleasure reading this poem, as always. I like the image, as well.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    So glad you could find my awe written in this one, May - the taller mountains are just an 'awesome' thing, aren't they?!! Thank you and enjoy the weekend! Yvette
Comment from Alchera
Exceptional
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In only five words the poetess has wrapped up as a present: life's truth and living joy within its hoping dreams . Perfectly and beautifully written within its required written prompt scheme 2/3/2 and structural format

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
    Thank you so much for these wonderful stars, Tony -- these tiny short ones are always a bit of a challenge, but they keep the brain thinking, yeah?!! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed -- take care over there, my friend! ;) Yvette
reply by Alchera on 30-Dec-2019
    Ciao Yvette! These are difficult to be interpreted but They just pop out now. I have written quite a few because there has be a time that I did all in seventeen syllables but the site's commitee has rejected them because they said that they were not publishable because " I had gone over the top with my readers" they were of difficult interpretation. In 2009 I didn't understand what they meant so I went on my own and there were no prompt contests as frequently as today. Now I got so many of these formats( check my locker: jewels one senryu or haiku or in seventeen) but to edit them again you have to pay. I personally do not agree because I would like to pay a whole yearly amount that gives me the possibility of exploring whatever and whoever I like to review and being well criticized without being obliged to bear stupid
    And nonsense reviews. Ok! I was too boring. Blessings Tony and may I ask , madam, please to drop your "sirs" at the end of some reviews? Ciao and thank you for your friendship.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
    Will do. Take care! :)
Comment from Sally Law
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Lovely, dear Yvetre. These short verses can be difficult and yours just has it all. Great job and and beautiful piece of art just adds to the full presentation.
Sending you my best today for the contest,
Sally xo

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
    Thank you, my Lady, for the wonderful review on this shortie -- much appreciated!! ;) Enjoy this little bit of 2019 and Happy 2020!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
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I admired the ethereal butterflies in the artwork you selected to complement your 2-3-2 Poem. Your few words are full of meaning and are worth repeating as a mantra. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    Thank you, Joan, for your wonderful comments!! Yvette
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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It does indeed. It's infectious and will change the atmosphere and everything in it's path. I like the message of this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    Thanx so much for your review, Jeffrey -- always good to hear from you, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment from phill doran
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Hello Anon Writer
A winner I think. A very clever and compact single thought, expressed within the form.
I am off to the booth right now...
I wish you well with this
cheers
phill

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    Thank you for the four stars, Phil. Happy New Year!
reply by phill doran on 27-Dec-2019
    ooh!
    My mistake - I have upgraded my rating - I am so sorry about that: a slip of the finger I assure you.
    ...and I *did* vote for this piece too!
    cheers
    phill
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a very nice entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry contest.
Your pretty verse is a god match for the beautiful artwork.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    Thank you.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Exceptional
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An excellent entry and a wonderful few words to describe laughter!

I like your choice of colors and your illustration. All made your post a winner in my view!

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much for such a wonderful review and the crowning star! Happy New year!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of the seven syllables you were allowed for this prompt. It would be hard to overestimate the power of laughter and how it affects people. Good job

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    Thank you.
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it. And, your message was clear. The colors match the dream. Good job. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
    Thank you.