Wishing
Our hope for a better tomorrow2 total reviews
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon Writer
I have read several 2-4-2's today: it is such a cramped format, it is impressive the number of writers (such as yourself) who can work on such a small canvas.
The piece works, but of course the 'wishing' alone cannot do it - I think we all realize there has to be a great amount of 'doing': perhaps that can only be expressed in a 5-7-5!
I wish you well with this and trust that you have enjoyed your day.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Hello Anon Writer
I have read several 2-4-2's today: it is such a cramped format, it is impressive the number of writers (such as yourself) who can work on such a small canvas.
The piece works, but of course the 'wishing' alone cannot do it - I think we all realize there has to be a great amount of 'doing': perhaps that can only be expressed in a 5-7-5!
I wish you well with this and trust that you have enjoyed your day.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Hello, thanks for the read and review. Granted wishing alone can't do it, but it is a start. By the way this format is 2-3-2, not 2-4-2. But I must agree it is cramped.
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ah yes, my typo! 2-3-2
cheers
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. Your message was very clear and appropriate for this time of year. I thought it was very nicely done.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. Your message was very clear and appropriate for this time of year. I thought it was very nicely done.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your read and your review. Much appreciated.
