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Comment from Mia Twysted
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Wonderful picture you have chosen to accompany this piece. It is very majestic. You paint a very wintery image with the words you use. I like way you put this together with the limits you had.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
    Hi Mia, thank you for your complimentary review, I?m happy you enjoyed the poem.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
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Good one! Old Man Winter comes and brings fun things to do. You did a great job with the shape. Love the presentation. He certainly looks like he means business.

I love winter.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your complimentary review damommy, I love the visual beauty of snow but can?t take the cold temps anymore!
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from GE Parson
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Hi Bucket,
I didn' count your syllables to see if you qualified for this contest. I started to but kept losing track and got dizzy counting, so I'm going to assume you qualified. This said, I really like the way you funneled down from Autumn to ice fishing.
Your poet friend, Parson

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
    Parson, thank you for your complimentary review.
    Hugs Trisha
Comment from Teri7
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Trish, This is a very well written candle poem you have penned for the potlatch poetry club. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your complimentary review, I appreciate it. That style was fun to compose.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Therese Caron
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This is a lovely candlelight poem. It keenly describes how autumn slides into winter, and all of the things winter brings. You used excellent words and your picture complements your work perfectly. Good luck in your contest!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your complimentary review, Therese. This was just for the challenge club, not a contest per se.
    Hugs
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Candlestick poem about the fun things we can engage in during the winter time when all is covered in white snow, there are still things we can do to make it fun.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
    Yes, it?s fun unless age and arthritis will not allow.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Ice fish is a stretch but it works here in this form. Very nicely done making the candle and using the rhyme. Even though I think they look like goblets, even mine. LOL

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 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Ice fishing is not your style then! Barb, Thank you very much for your positive review,
    Hugs, Trisha