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Comment from Fonda Little
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I love the colors you used for the poem! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much, Fonda! Blessings
    Hugs Trisha
Comment from susand3022
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Hi Trisha, This is a Potlatch I was gone for! I've never done one of these before. I liked this Old Man Winter poem... but I'm giving him a sleeping pill for a couple of days. Here in New England, I woke up this morning, turned off the heat and opened the windows! I'm not closing them until tomorrow evening when the cold front comes back through! LOL A fun poem :)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    I used to live near Vermont, so I can relate to the erratic temperatures . I appreciate your kind review, and I?m glad that you enjoyed my challenge version.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a very good shape poem.
While keeping the shape of a candle light, the well written verse tells about winter.
Well done. I think you've met the challenge very nicely.
Sharon

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Thanks Sharon , I appreciate your positive review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Carl DeVere
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Great graphic and matching narrative. It sent shivers down my spine thinking about this season...not my favorite, but still eerily beautiful. I suppose this season is always referred to as an old man--fittingly so. I'm told many older folks actually die in the Winter.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Carl, Thank you very much for your positive review,
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bobby Jo
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I wrote a poem with the same sort of principals. This makes wi ter exciting and fun. This was fun. Thanks for sharing and I hope this year is a great one

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Good for you too, I hope! Thank you very much for your positive review,
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Judy Richards
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I really enjoyed your winter poem. I love the words about winter creeping along and darker days being present. It really describes our winter here in the state of WA. Your poem brings me chills. Great use of words. Reminds me of the fun we can have even in winter. Great job.

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 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    June, Thank you very much for your positive review,
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Well used alliteration in this descriptive Candlelight poem Trisha. You really set the picture well and the final line
His winter playground for fun - is a good saucer finish. Nice one, I haven't tried mine yet
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    I?m glad you enjoyed the poem.. valda, Thank you very much for your positive review,
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Yes we are now touched by this old man and the freeze extends into our soul as the icicles form and winter sets in, I enjoyed your candlelight poem here Trisha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Dolly Thank you very much for your positive review,
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your club poem, Bucketlist. Your image choice sets the tone for your well-written poem. Your words are descriptive--I could picture all of what you wrote. I like your color scheme, too. Ol' man Winter seems to be causing many issues in some areas while avoiding others. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love, Jan

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Yes winter brings a precarious weather system, which can take lives without caution. Writing about it is fun. Jan,
    thank you very much for your positive review,
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from June Sargent
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Very nice candle light poem! The picture you've painted is spot on. Old Man Winter is here to stay awhile. For those who enjoy ice fishing, this is great. I prefer to stay inside with some hot chocolate!

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
    Thanks June! I also prefer the temperature inside, but the beauty of snow has me vicariously enjoying winter. Dem ol bones do not like cold!
    Hugs, Trisha