Coconut Sunrise
A Minute Poem entry19 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
June,
This brings to mind a sunrise on a tropical island. The words and artwork match well. This minute poem tells of th beauty and hope of a sunrise.
Congratulations on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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June,
This brings to mind a sunrise on a tropical island. The words and artwork match well. This minute poem tells of th beauty and hope of a sunrise.
Congratulations on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much! Wish I were lounging around on a tropical island at sunrise...without a mask...
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You are most kindly welcome, June.
I wish I could be in Scotland without a mask.
Joan
Comment from MissMerri
This is beautiful, and full of such powerful images, June. Congratulations on winning second place in the Minute Poetry contest. It is a most deserved prize. I especially loved the second stanza. The sun painting the sky with amber strokes is so appealing, and the swaying dew-kissed trees adds to the wonderful ambiance. Well done, and a true delight to read, this first day back online. ~MM
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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This is beautiful, and full of such powerful images, June. Congratulations on winning second place in the Minute Poetry contest. It is a most deserved prize. I especially loved the second stanza. The sun painting the sky with amber strokes is so appealing, and the swaying dew-kissed trees adds to the wonderful ambiance. Well done, and a true delight to read, this first day back online. ~MM
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! And congrats to you on your lovely minute poem as well. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful word picture in your minute poem! Loved the personification of the sun and stars and the painting imagery of a gorgeous sunrise. Congratulations on the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Beautiful word picture in your minute poem! Loved the personification of the sun and stars and the painting imagery of a gorgeous sunrise. Congratulations on the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for your positive sentiments!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a fine entry for the Minute poem contest. Worded beautifully as well as illustrated. Your poem flows along well, is description, and tranquil. Best of luck. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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This is a fine entry for the Minute poem contest. Worded beautifully as well as illustrated. Your poem flows along well, is description, and tranquil. Best of luck. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Minute poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words done in the correct format. You used very beautiful imagery that wants so well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings,Teri
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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This is a very well written Minute poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words done in the correct format. You used very beautiful imagery that wants so well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings,Teri
Comment Written 24-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written minute poem about a beautiful tropical sunrise between the coconut trees with a golden glow.
Merry Christmas to you and your family.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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A very well-written minute poem about a beautiful tropical sunrise between the coconut trees with a golden glow.
Merry Christmas to you and your family.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, can I just relax my shoulders and sigh...? Aaaaaah, June - such a lovely offering in this cold season, my lady -- wonderful imagery and descriptive terms 'liquid gold' and the sun painting and 'dew-kissed' and.... yeah, siiiiiigh. Thanx for the reprieve from the Winter, if only in vision and hope! ;) :) Good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Oh, can I just relax my shoulders and sigh...? Aaaaaah, June - such a lovely offering in this cold season, my lady -- wonderful imagery and descriptive terms 'liquid gold' and the sun painting and 'dew-kissed' and.... yeah, siiiiiigh. Thanx for the reprieve from the Winter, if only in vision and hope! ;) :) Good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you for reading and offering your encouraging and insightful comments!
Comment from lauralumummu
A lovely poem describing a place we would all like to be right now I least those that live near me. I love the line with amber strokes sun paints the sky. All the best, Laura.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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A lovely poem describing a place we would all like to be right now I least those that live near me. I love the line with amber strokes sun paints the sky. All the best, Laura.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Lovely! The imagery is even more incredible than your picture! I love this subject matter and you did an excellent job bringing me to a morning sunrise on the beach!
xoxo
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Lovely! The imagery is even more incredible than your picture! I love this subject matter and you did an excellent job bringing me to a morning sunrise on the beach!
xoxo
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments!
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It is my please June! :) xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is something fresh and beautiful in these words and they fall from the tongue like nectar, much enjoyed and my first six of the week, a fine minute June, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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There is something fresh and beautiful in these words and they fall from the tongue like nectar, much enjoyed and my first six of the week, a fine minute June, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments! And I especially appreciate the generous stars!
