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To My Secret Admirer Finale

Kristin and Will

31 total reviews 
Comment from Carla Trinklein
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Such a nice touch to have them marry in Will's father's room, with him officiating! Also nice that it all happened five years ago, so that we could have a glimpse into their lives today. A completely satisfying story, very well told! Thank you!

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
    Wow, am I in tears with such a sweet display of stars! Thank you so much, dear Carla. It's so wonderful to have a fan and friend so close to me here at FanStory.

    Don't leave FS without giving me your address so that I may send you a signed book. I will be publishing soon, a Christmas gift from my middle son. 'What The Blind Girl Saw' is almost finished. The finale is tommorow and the epilogue in late January. I move to publish right away hopefully in February! My son published a rough copy for me to hold in my hands for Christmas. It is awesome, even without the last two chapters. I want for thank you for all the encouraging reviews you leave with me. It has made me a better writer.
    Your fan and friend forever,
    Sally xoxo
reply by Carla Trinklein on 05-Jan-2020
    So happy to hear that you will be published soon! What a great surprise from you son...and I would be honored to have a signed copy, but I would also like to pay you for it...you?ve earned it with all of your hard work. I was always sorry I didn?t get in on ?What the Blind Girl Saw? from the beginning. My address is as follows:
    Carla Trinklein
    1178 Rochester Road
    Ligonier, IN. 46767

    I will so look forward to receiving it!
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Oh, this made me cry! I'm a bit emotional these days for some reason. A wonderful ending, happy and sad, and happy with little isabella. Well done as always. Rox

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
    Double blessing here, Roxanna! Thank you so much for the superb rating and gracious stars. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for the new year,
    Sally xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Oh, what another wonderful chapter. What a nice couple you have created or is the couple nonfiction? These chapters sure are romantic. Love reading them.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much, dear Rosemary. I'm so glad you enjoyed my final chapter to this love letter saga.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Sally, I hope your holiday was a good one and that this finds you well. Though I am a hopeless romantic myself, I am equally a big skeptic, don't ask me how that works, because I haven't figured it out yet. With that being said, I think that was a wonderful finale to an unbelievable love story. It is hard to believe a love like that could happen in this day and age, but that's the skeptic in me. Great job!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Thank you, dear poet. I'm glad you enjoyed my stories and gave them a chance. I love this kind of love story every day. Sending you my best today as always, and hopefulmess for the new year,
    Sally :)
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A six doesn't really do this justice. What a beautiful love story and this very gifted writer conveys very real human emotion through all the characters. The dialogue is real and moves naturally. The entire story moved naturally, believable, possible. I loved every bit of it. I would point out a favorite part, but the whole bit is my favorite part. No, six stars is not enough. This should be showered in stars. Excellence. Superior. Yes, SUPERIOR is the word I was searching for.
Wendy

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
    I knew you would love this, hopeless romantic that you are. I am honored from head to toe by this superior review and kindest compliments. I am overwhelmed by your generosity once again. Thank you!!!
    Sending you my best today as always, and {more} blessings for the new year.
    Sally xoxo
Comment from susand3022
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Hi Sally, This is a really sweet story. He really found himself a winning girl in Kristin. There aren't all that many around like her anymore.
It's nice to read about a family where people take care of each other and don't see it as a burden.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind commemts. It is always so appreciated. Kristin is based on my loving daughter-in-law. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year,
    Sally xo
Comment from Teri7
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Sally, This is a very well written (chapter - short story) you have penned. It made my heart smile as I read reading it. You used very good descriptive words and very realistic and loving dialogue. Thank you so much for sharing this. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Thank you, sweet Teri. I appreciate your kind review and compliments. So glad you enjoyed this,
    Sally xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh how wonderful and some very much needed real romance for the holiday season, Lady Sal! ;) Sorry I'm a little behind -- company in all week! Thanx so much for this wonderful story from start to finish!! ;) Happy New Year! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    Thank you for the wonderful review and kind comments, dear Yvette. I'm glad you enjoyed all these love letter stories and the ending. :) ;) Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for the new year,
    Sal xo
Comment from Therese Caron
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This is a beautiful love story, written in a way that makes you wonder if their life together turned out as perfectly as it seemed it would. Written well grammatically and structurally, this Is a story that makes you want to keep reading.I would love to see how they turn out.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    Thank you for the lovely review and kindest compliments, dear Therese. I'm so glad you enjoyed these love letter stories.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Diana L Crawford
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And you finish with a spectacular wedding leading this beautiful love story into eternity! I was a little worried there about the captain! Great way to surprise us as well as Kristin! LoL! I admire your creative work always and
this touching love story is a topper for sure!!! It deserves a six! And you will always have my sixes while they last! xoxoxo

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    Thank you, dear Diana. I appreciate your sweet review as always. I'm so honored you enjoyed these love letter stories. Sending you my best today and blessings for the new year.

    Sally xoxo