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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "White Wonder"Belief
7 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a praiseworthy write and so appropriate for this picture, you created a serene peaceful scene here, the magic and power of faithful thoughts, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
This is a praiseworthy write and so appropriate for this picture, you created a serene peaceful scene here, the magic and power of faithful thoughts, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Glad you enjoyed it.Thanks for all your reviews,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Trisha. Your poem is so nice. The theme dwells upon God's creation of diversity of snowflakes, but it can be related to everything else, too. There is only one of each of us, but all are different. These lines are especially nice:
"Flakes may all look alike
But each has diversity
They fall as lonely flakes
As part of a larger theme"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
Hi Trisha. Your poem is so nice. The theme dwells upon God's creation of diversity of snowflakes, but it can be related to everything else, too. There is only one of each of us, but all are different. These lines are especially nice:
"Flakes may all look alike
But each has diversity
They fall as lonely flakes
As part of a larger theme"
Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks for all your reviews,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from wanderlost
My favorite stanza:
For virgin snow is special
Untainted beauty at best
How fast it becomes grey
after it all comes to rest
Not sure if this is meant to be a religious allegory, but it comes across that way to me. Pleasant to read aloud. Thanks for sharing!
~W
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
My favorite stanza:
For virgin snow is special
Untainted beauty at best
How fast it becomes grey
after it all comes to rest
Not sure if this is meant to be a religious allegory, but it comes across that way to me. Pleasant to read aloud. Thanks for sharing!
~W
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks for all your reviews,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
Trisha this is a very beautiful and very well written poem for the faith poetry contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
Trisha this is a very beautiful and very well written poem for the faith poetry contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks for all your reviews,
Hugs, and blessings,Trisha
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a lovely verse for the Faith Poetry contest.
Snowflakes, like people, are all individuals.
The picture that you've posted is beautiful.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
I think this is a lovely verse for the Faith Poetry contest.
Snowflakes, like people, are all individuals.
The picture that you've posted is beautiful.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks for all your reviews,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is beautiful and I love all of the powerful messages conveyed in it. It speaks of the uniqueness of many things to me, not just snowflakes. I love the beautiful descriptive wording. The rhyme and flow is seamless and beautiful. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
This is beautiful and I love all of the powerful messages conveyed in it. It speaks of the uniqueness of many things to me, not just snowflakes. I love the beautiful descriptive wording. The rhyme and flow is seamless and beautiful. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I?m glad you enjoyed my poem . Jeffrey, I appreciate your good reviews this year, and I wish you a blessed Christmas.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've used your combination of the Pix This Club picture and the Faith poetry contest really well as you describe the intricacies and the beauty of each snow flake. Well done Trisha,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
You've used your combination of the Pix This Club picture and the Faith poetry contest really well as you describe the intricacies and the beauty of each snow flake. Well done Trisha,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks for all your reviews,
Hugs, Trisha