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Two of Us: Our Story

How we went from friendship to marriage in 19 years.

30 total reviews 
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Very sweet story of a long friendship growing into love. You tell it well and it could be a chapter in your memoir. Thank you for sharing your romance with me and others. God bless you.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
    Thank you very much, Carol, for your excellent and beautiful review, the five stars and your kind comments and blessing. May God bless you too, and your family, and keep you all safe.
    I was so happy to receive just one more review, for an even 30! And I'm happy that you caught the promotion, which expires in a few minutes.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
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I loved this and had missed it earlier. I guess it was before you were in my fan base. Precious, precious! He is very patient but good things are worth waiting for. He saw the prize in you... at last! Thank you for sharing. It makes me love you more! Sending you my best and six shining stars,
Sal XOs....

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
    Thank you for reading and reviewing this, dear Sally, and for the six bright stars! Yes, this post is originally from December 2019. Helen Lyenochka had been asking me for posts about Jorge, after I wrote the poem about the Super Bowl, and when she read this, she went ahead and promoted it for me! I was going to wait until December to revive it, but then I decided to go all out and add some pumps. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yes, Jorge had so much patience, and waited for me for so long! It's just a taste of how much God loves me. Thank you so much for your love and friendship. May God bless you, over and over! Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a beautiful love story. I see you originally posted it some time ago. I guess you so promoted it again an so that is probably why I didn't receive a notice but I so glad I got to read it. My love for my husband grew slowly to but not quite as slowly as yours did. I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much, Beth, for your beautiful review and especially for the six shining stars! This is what happened: Helen read my poem about watching the Super Bowl with Jorge, and she asked me whether I had mentioned him elsewhere in my writing. I told her about this story, but that it's not eligible to be revived until December -- and you were right, by the way, it has to be two years. Reviving a post isn't a freebie, but your fans do get notified. Anyway, Helen (Iyenochka) was so touched by our story that she promoted it with, I think, the Treasure Chest... then I figured, why not go all out, and then I added some pumps.
    So when I first wrote this in December 2019, I was very new to FanStory and only got ten reviews, but now I have about 30, so I'm very happy about that. Helen felt that it's the kind of marriage people need to read about, which was really so kind of her. It also improves the status of the story, but it makes me happy to have lots of readers. I'm glad you found it :-)
    God bless you and your family, my friend!
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a very beautiful romantic story. Looks like your were destined to be with Jorge. Very beautiful photo of you two. I enjoyed reading your story. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much, Joanne, for your beautiful, excellent review, the five stars and your lovely comments. Yes, we do feel that we were destined to be together -- something for which we are extremely grateful. Thank you for noticing the photo! I think you're the first one to do so.
    This contest was for 2019, and I didn't win, but I was very new to FanStory. I only had ten reviews, but now that a sweet friend so kindly decided to promote our story (and I added some pumps), I have three times as many reviews, and the story has Recognized status. So I'm thrilled that more people are reading it, which is what my friend had in mind, when she promoted it.
    May God bless you and your family, and keep you safe. Thanks again for reading!
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Ulla
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Aw, Mary Kay, what a lovely true story this is! I so enjoyed it, and I must say that your Jorge was most persistence and it paid off at last. I'm so sorry that you've had so many adversaries, as well. A hug. And good luck. Ulla xx

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
    Thank you so very much, Ulla, for your beautiful review and very thoughtful comments. We have been through a lot, it's true; but we've weathered the storms with God, and with one another. Jorge was an incredibly persistent fellow, but I have to say that he was always respectful as well -- he was in it for the long haul! Thanks for the hug, sending one back :-) God bless you, my friend. Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Judy Lawless
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You've done a great job of paying tribute to your husband, the man I suspect you were in love with long before you recognized it. Good for him for waiting for you.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much for your excellent and moving review, the five stars and your thoughtful comments. Yes, he really grew on me over time, and my love for him grew. It really was the grace of God, that he waited so long; very few men would have done so! May God bless you and your loved ones, and keep you safe.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Mistydawn
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What a sweet love-story about a love, marriage that seems to have always been destined to be. It's funny how things work themselves out. I'm glad you two are happy together. Hopefully you'll have many years together. Your story is well-written, very interesting from start to finish. Good luck with your contest.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
    Thank you very much, Mistydawn, for your beautiful and excellent review. I greatly appreciate your many wonderful comments about my story, and our life together. It was a contest from 2019, but a very sweet friend saw the post and wanted to promote it for me! So then I added some pumps too, touched it up a little and added the Notes and the video. The story only had ten reviews when I posted it in 2019, but now it's Recognized, and I think it now has enough reviews to be considered for All Time Best. So these reviews are
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
    As I was saying when I apparently pushed the wrong button, these reviews are really helping! May God bless you and your family. Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Susan Larson
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What a beautiful tribute to Jorge and your beautiful friendship, courtship and marriage . How blessed you both are. Thank you for sharing your love story.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
    Thank you for your excellent review, the five stars and your lovely comments. We are very blessed indeed and I thank God so much for a loving marriage! May God bless you and your family also.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from karenina
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Love has a funny way of catching us no matter how far or fast we run, doesn't it? You know that old saying: "If you want to make God laugh, tell Him your plans?" -- That came to mind. It seems no matter how many times you thought this was not your "marryin' man"--God kept you on the journey and guided your path--blessing you both in the process! This is a real life story told in a real life way--truth is, it's never "Mr. Perfect"-it's just "Mr. Perfect for YOU"--and often we don't see the forest for the trees for a good long time! Happy Valentine's day! I am so pleased you were there for Jorge as he successfully battled back from a heart attack and surgery...and "At Last" is the perfect song for you both!--Karenina

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much, Karenina, for your excellent and lovely review, the five stars and your very thoughtful comments. Everything you said really resonates with me, and shows how well you understand my story. I did stop, at least a few times along the way, and pray, God, could he be the one? And I'm glad I asked! Because when the answer came, it was quite clear. Yes, he said it was very good timing that I was there for him, after his heart attack and surgery; of course, I would have been there for him as a friend, but it would not have been the same. And yes, "At Last" was truly our song. I think we bought tracks from three different artists who sang it, but she, Etta James, did it the best. Her bluesy rendition was hypnotizing.
    May God bless you and your loved ones, and keep you safe.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
reply by karenina on 14-Feb-2021
    What a kind and gracious thank you for a review from my heart... I wish you days and days of happy beginnings as you find new ways to love and be loved unconditionally!--Karenina
Comment from Sanku
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It is a very touching story of love developing slowly and culminating in marriage . A lovely tribute to your best friend and partner for life. All the best for you future life.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
    Thank you very much, Sanku, for your excellent review, the five stars and your thoughtful comments. I appreciate your time, reading and reviewing the story of our friendship and marriage. May God bless you and your family. - Mary Kay