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Tanka(baby emperor)

Penguin dancing the flapper

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Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your tanka and your accompanying artwork are delightful--made me smile. The emperor penguin is an amazing creature to observe--looking like a little man in a tux, :-)

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2019

Comment from Gloria ....
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Aw, this is seriously cute, Pam. Love your penguin painting, with so much ridiculous great fun.

A perfect pairing of the tanka too and I wish you a Merry Christmas too. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2019

Comment from June Sargent
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What a cutie! I love these little characters. They know just how to entertain us with their antics and happy feet! Thanks for sharing such a whimsical and fun piece. Great illustration.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019

Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Tanka (baby emperor), is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019

Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for this lovely Emperor Penguin dance! It would make a perfect Christmas card plus the poem! I hope and pray that your neck will be well treated and quickly healed. Thanks for keeping in touch despite all the discomfort you had to put up with to post your paintings and poems.
May you be blessed this Christmas and all through the New Year!!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019

Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a wonderful painting, Pam. So cute and freeing. Your tanka expresses fun and I like that as well as your sense of whimsy with the snowflake on the penguin's nose and the thought of him dancing.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
    Did you notice his shoes. He is about to lift up his right foot. The Flapper involves flapping of the arms and alternate kicking with leg. Thanks for the wonderful review. I am leaving the. site for awhile. Will have miss you
Comment from Therese Caron
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Your poem is lovely and I am impressed with your image, drawn by you. Very talented person! The poem is wonderful, and picturing the penguin dancing the way you describe is very amusing! Very nice work!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019

Comment from Barbaraj1
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Sorry to hear about your neck. Get well soon. I love your poem and the
picture of the penguin. This is an excellent Tanka and I enjoyed your
poem. Happy Holidays.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019

Comment from RShipp
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Yes, I can see the flapper being done by this young penguin. And he seems to be enjoying the dance with the music clearly being heard in his head. I suspect, he sees the snowflakes assisting in creating teh cheerful rhythms.

The picture you have chosen and the words go wonderfully together!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019

Comment from rhonnie69
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MERRY CHRISTMAS PAM: Again...thank you for sharing. Once more ...like always...your work is brief, clear, to the point, interesting, and relative to every day life. Your poems gives your readers something to read and think about, that's worth while. This one is good. So are you, Pam. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019