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Poetry For Christmas, pen 10

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assorted styles of poems about Christmas

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Comment from CD Richards
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That's a Santa to give the kids nightmares! The kids would do just fine on the reindeer's diet ;-)

Most Santas should not be dining on cookies, though this one looks like he could put a few away without too much trouble.

A most fun poem, Dawn. Well done.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
    HAHAHA! Well, er, um, ah, he's kinda cute...

    Thanks so much, Craig. :))
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This is a fun Santa write with a touch of reality mixed in with the fantasy of Christmas and all its traditions! So many Santas and so little time to enjoy them all! He he he, I enjoyed your fun words Dawn, very inventive, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is pretty witty. I think children everywhere have had something they didn't want to eat, and Santa seems to have it made when it comes to cookies and treats--or at least once a year, anyway. My choice would have been onions and eggplant. Fun share!

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019