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Family Ties Volume two.

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Comment from JLR
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Oh, the modern miracles of throw-aways, one of the best inventions for dads! Very cute especially with the phot which brings the humor fully to the center. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2019

Comment from Mark D. R.
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A funny poem you created! Your selected artwork is perfectly matched to your few words. I too have used the same FanArtist for some of my entries. IMHO your extra aside is a double entendre for the baby and his/her poop problem.

Thanks for my entertaining read for the day.

Slang is appropriate for your entry. I'd prefer " ya' " instead of 'ya.'

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2019