New Year 2020
Chime Operandi19 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Uplifting New Year wish/poem to left behind the old year with its heartaches and pains and start the New Year fresh with hope and new wonderful intentions.
Happy New Year to you and your family.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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A very well-written Uplifting New Year wish/poem to left behind the old year with its heartaches and pains and start the New Year fresh with hope and new wonderful intentions.
Happy New Year to you and your family.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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I wish the same for you and yours, Sandra Thank you very much for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Susan Larson
I'm encouraged to try new styles of poetry when I see others do that. Thank you for sharing this. It inspires me to broaden my writing attempts in the coming year.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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I'm encouraged to try new styles of poetry when I see others do that. Thank you for sharing this. It inspires me to broaden my writing attempts in the coming year.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Go for it! I appreciate your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Therese Caron
Maybe this is your first try, but it's wonderful. It looks to me as though you got the format right, the rhyming pattern right, and you used very good words in your poem.The moving fireworks display adds a very nice touch to your work. Beautiful job.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Maybe this is your first try, but it's wonderful. It looks to me as though you got the format right, the rhyming pattern right, and you used very good words in your poem.The moving fireworks display adds a very nice touch to your work. Beautiful job.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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I appreciate your wonderful review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sally Law
I need to be brave and try this style. You did a great job, Trisha. So good to see you and this wonderful poem.
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for the new year.
Sally Law xo
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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I need to be brave and try this style. You did a great job, Trisha. So good to see you and this wonderful poem.
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for the new year.
Sally Law xo
Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Yes, go for it! I appreciate your very kind review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from beizanten
What a beautiful picture, thanks for sharing. A good opening line. Another good line. The rest is very good with beautiful imaginary. You have done well. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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What a beautiful picture, thanks for sharing. A good opening line. Another good line. The rest is very good with beautiful imaginary. You have done well. Keep it up!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for your complimentary review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a lovely New Years greeting. I think you've managed the style nicely as well.
2020 has a nice ring to it doesn't it?
I hope you have a wonderful New Years.
Sharon
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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I think this is a lovely New Years greeting. I think you've managed the style nicely as well.
2020 has a nice ring to it doesn't it?
I hope you have a wonderful New Years.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Sharon, Thank you very much for your positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jlance1208
Good job, but I did notice a good many errors. The punctuation is wrong in a few places. Periods are missing, as well as commas. It could flow a lot better if you added a bit more, and edited some. Happy new year!
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Good job, but I did notice a good many errors. The punctuation is wrong in a few places. Periods are missing, as well as commas. It could flow a lot better if you added a bit more, and edited some. Happy new year!
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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I have no comment
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I like your offering of cheerfulness but mostly because of the encouragement of self-examination, Trisha!! ;) :) Wonderful implementation of Dolly's style... guess we'll all need to follow suit soon enough! ;) lol! Thanx so much! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Oh, I like your offering of cheerfulness but mostly because of the encouragement of self-examination, Trisha!! ;) :) Wonderful implementation of Dolly's style... guess we'll all need to follow suit soon enough! ;) lol! Thanx so much! :) Yvette
Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Yvette, for all you? popping in and outs,? I appreciate you. Thank you very much for your positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
Trish, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about the new year coming up. I love the new format you tried. Very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I hope you have a very lovely and blessed New Year my friend! May God bless you! Teri
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Trish, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about the new year coming up. I love the new format you tried. Very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I hope you have a very lovely and blessed New Year my friend! May God bless you! Teri
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Teri, I wish you and your family blessings, and health Thank you very much for your positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
