Good Old Times
The Good Old Days Poem7 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
indeed, life was so much simpler then and much more healthy. now kids sit in front of the computer screen and play games which have no taste of outdoor fun.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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indeed, life was so much simpler then and much more healthy. now kids sit in front of the computer screen and play games which have no taste of outdoor fun.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from sunnilicious
Friends are very important to our lives. Mine are all online now. Modern days are so different. Well thought out and nicely written poem. Creative. Good consonance rhyme from watching-walking-viewing-spending-having. Good alliteration from women-walking. Good repeat with good old. Excellent work. Nice :)
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Friends are very important to our lives. Mine are all online now. Modern days are so different. Well thought out and nicely written poem. Creative. Good consonance rhyme from watching-walking-viewing-spending-having. Good alliteration from women-walking. Good repeat with good old. Excellent work. Nice :)
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from donette1914
these are precious memories
you express your feelings and it was very touching
this was a well penned poem
it was an honor to read your work
thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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these are precious memories
you express your feelings and it was very touching
this was a well penned poem
it was an honor to read your work
thank you for sharing
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Thank you! You're welcome. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the "The Good Old Days" writing prompt.
Your verse is a nice walk down memory lane.
I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the "The Good Old Days" writing prompt.
Your verse is a nice walk down memory lane.
I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think we start to yearn for those days we knew and loved, and progress can make us unsure as life moves too fast and we cling to our memories, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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I think we start to yearn for those days we knew and loved, and progress can make us unsure as life moves too fast and we cling to our memories, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-A good poem about
remembering 'the good old days.'
-Good description of the
activities you enjoyed with
family and friends.
-I like how you structured your
poem between the two.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-A good poem about
remembering 'the good old days.'
-Good description of the
activities you enjoyed with
family and friends.
-I like how you structured your
poem between the two.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
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You are quite welcome, and I am glad to hear you are happy:)
Comment from wanderlost
Thank you for sharing. The first stanza of your poem is nice, and evokes memories of young boys goofing around on the town.
I'm a bit confused by your second stanza... about having reunions with old friends... is that the good old days or is that present day that lets you reminisce?
~W
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing. The first stanza of your poem is nice, and evokes memories of young boys goofing around on the town.
I'm a bit confused by your second stanza... about having reunions with old friends... is that the good old days or is that present day that lets you reminisce?
~W
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thank you! It is the present day that lets me reminisce. I'm glad you enjoyed it!