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Comment from Gert sherwood
Smile to you rhonnie69
for the message you to one you admire, saying,
"But my love for you will never end.
My promise of peace won't ever die."
Gert
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Smile to you rhonnie69
for the message you to one you admire, saying,
"But my love for you will never end.
My promise of peace won't ever die."
Gert
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from Darlene Franklin
There's several things I like about this dialogue between a man and God about the woman he hopes to marry. I like the specificity of the "North Atlantic Ocean." I like God's response of "I insist." A good poem.
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There's several things I like about this dialogue between a man and God about the woman he hopes to marry. I like the specificity of the "North Atlantic Ocean." I like God's response of "I insist." A good poem.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
