The Good Old Days...Whew!
What a race it was those good old days37 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, Oh I do like this poem. Full of truths about all the things that life is made of. You've pulled through LOL. And enjoyed every moment - well sort of, in retrospect. As long as you can say you would happily go through it all again, then it really was The Good Old Days. Good luck - and Enjoy Christmas and all the best for the coming year. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Hello anon, Oh I do like this poem. Full of truths about all the things that life is made of. You've pulled through LOL. And enjoyed every moment - well sort of, in retrospect. As long as you can say you would happily go through it all again, then it really was The Good Old Days. Good luck - and Enjoy Christmas and all the best for the coming year. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The good old days were not always that good and we have selective memories when it comes to remembering them. For me, the best time of my life is now. Maybe it is because I have learned to be content. I enjoyed your interpretation here, food for thought, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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The good old days were not always that good and we have selective memories when it comes to remembering them. For me, the best time of my life is now. Maybe it is because I have learned to be content. I enjoyed your interpretation here, food for thought, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Yes, the present moment is awesome!
Comment from RShipp
I loved that the reminiscing stayed so positive. I could see your family situations changing before my eyes. Your word choice was superb.
I could relate so actively to each of your 'changes in life'.
It truly sounds as if you have been blessed!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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I loved that the reminiscing stayed so positive. I could see your family situations changing before my eyes. Your word choice was superb.
I could relate so actively to each of your 'changes in life'.
It truly sounds as if you have been blessed!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Remarkably blessed!
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! You have written this story well. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! You have written this story well. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Raul, thank you!
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You're welcome
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it but I did notice two errors:. Making "me" feel I would drown. And, finally "be" spent. Good job and message.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it but I did notice two errors:. Making "me" feel I would drown. And, finally "be" spent. Good job and message.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Sugarray77
I love your offering for the Goodl Old Days prompt. It is very good and bring up so many memories we can relate to ... and have lived through. Well done on your descriptive choices and rhymes.
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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I love your offering for the Goodl Old Days prompt. It is very good and bring up so many memories we can relate to ... and have lived through. Well done on your descriptive choices and rhymes.
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Melissa, thank you. I reflect peacefully that the past is past, the future, yet to be revealed and the present moment is pretty awesome!
Comment from Alchera
Yes, the Good Old Days all depended on the ups and downs of our living life: if lived well or bad. Throughout the seven well rhymed stanzaic structure I have felt a sort of non content hopeless narrative strorylined content due to ones poverty and honest living but moneyless state of mind. Each one of us has a different state of humbled poverty of which many people are happy of, living it with proudness and happiness. A good job. I liked it all trough-
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Yes, the Good Old Days all depended on the ups and downs of our living life: if lived well or bad. Throughout the seven well rhymed stanzaic structure I have felt a sort of non content hopeless narrative strorylined content due to ones poverty and honest living but moneyless state of mind. Each one of us has a different state of humbled poverty of which many people are happy of, living it with proudness and happiness. A good job. I liked it all trough-
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you Alchera~ I reflect peacefully that the past is past, the future, yet to be revealed and the present moment is pretty awesome!
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I wish you the best my dear new Fanstorian friend! Greetings from Italy
Comment from Bichon
Thank you for reminiscing on your good old days, they were a pleasure to read! I'm glad you are still enjoying life now too. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you for reminiscing on your good old days, they were a pleasure to read! I'm glad you are still enjoying life now too. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thanks, the good news is the past is past, the future yet to be revealed and the present moment is awesome!
Comment from LeannaP
This makes a fine entry for the contest.
Much luck to you in it as this makes a strong contender.
I like how your story conveys. The idea of high mortgage rates is rather unsettling.
Nice work! Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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This makes a fine entry for the contest.
Much luck to you in it as this makes a strong contender.
I like how your story conveys. The idea of high mortgage rates is rather unsettling.
Nice work! Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Leanna thank you!
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Your welcome
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I've always thought the 'good old days' are because people choose to remember only the good times. Great rhyming poem about this topic, I agree with both you and the sign. Enjoyed this and good luck in the contest.
cheers.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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I've always thought the 'good old days' are because people choose to remember only the good times. Great rhyming poem about this topic, I agree with both you and the sign. Enjoyed this and good luck in the contest.
cheers.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you