Tanka(flamingo crashes)
Flamingo crashes dance party28 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
Don't know if he's naked or not, but he looks lonely - with everyone else entwining and ruffling their feathers all over the place. Surely he feels left out. Nice painting. Very well done.
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Don't know if he's naked or not, but he looks lonely - with everyone else entwining and ruffling their feathers all over the place. Surely he feels left out. Nice painting. Very well done.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
Comment from LeannaP
Flamingos remind me of strawbirds. Just beautiful.
I love the image used to help illustrate your poem
Nicely written.
I look forward to definitely reading more of your work.
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Flamingos remind me of strawbirds. Just beautiful.
I love the image used to help illustrate your poem
Nicely written.
I look forward to definitely reading more of your work.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
Comment from wanderlost
This reminds me of what its like to not have a date on new years eve. Everyone's kissing and you're standing there with a dumb look on your face, feeling awkward and unnoticed. Thanks for sharing!
~W
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This reminds me of what its like to not have a date on new years eve. Everyone's kissing and you're standing there with a dumb look on your face, feeling awkward and unnoticed. Thanks for sharing!
~W
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from Hitcher
He ain't getting the OK to move in and partner up that's for sure. That's what happens when you turn up to the party late, all the pretty ones are taken already, ha ha. Nice!
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He ain't getting the OK to move in and partner up that's for sure. That's what happens when you turn up to the party late, all the pretty ones are taken already, ha ha. Nice!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from amada
Your colorful work here with a slight double meaning produced a nice smile. Your lines are very well constructed and it carries the image of a flaming flamingo. It was a nice way to start a new busy day.
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Your colorful work here with a slight double meaning produced a nice smile. Your lines are very well constructed and it carries the image of a flaming flamingo. It was a nice way to start a new busy day.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from dragonpoet
Cute ekphrastic poem about this picture. Maybe he is trying to break them up out of jealousy. I think his state of mind is naked even if his body isn't.
Keep writing
Happy Holidays.
Joan
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Cute ekphrastic poem about this picture. Maybe he is trying to break them up out of jealousy. I think his state of mind is naked even if his body isn't.
Keep writing
Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concise poem is vividly descriptive and appealing. The poem and the artwork are a well-matched pair. Your contrast of the dancing birds and the intruder is delightful.
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Your concise poem is vividly descriptive and appealing. The poem and the artwork are a well-matched pair. Your contrast of the dancing birds and the intruder is delightful.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Tanka (flamingo crashes), is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Tanka (flamingo crashes), is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Pam. This is a wonderful post and painting. So enjoyable. Thank you for sharing your most recent art piece. Your unique poems and painting style are a combined joy. Marilyn
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Hi Pam. This is a wonderful post and painting. So enjoyable. Thank you for sharing your most recent art piece. Your unique poems and painting style are a combined joy. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
Comment from royowen
What a fascinating creature a flamingo is, is it the flamingo that mates for life, or is it the swan? I know there are several species that do. Excellent tanka Pam, good to see you again. Blessings, Roy
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What a fascinating creature a flamingo is, is it the flamingo that mates for life, or is it the swan? I know there are several species that do. Excellent tanka Pam, good to see you again. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
