Sweet, sweet Dreams
Good night3 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love the picture it goes so well with the first line -Dreamy clouds float on a pillow of hope.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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I love the picture it goes so well with the first line -Dreamy clouds float on a pillow of hope.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thank you
Comment from J.T. Blossom
This poem could very well be a lullaby. Have you thought about setting it to music? Maybe repeating a few lines as a chorus? Keep up the good writing!
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This poem could very well be a lullaby. Have you thought about setting it to music? Maybe repeating a few lines as a chorus? Keep up the good writing!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Although the picture is of a child, this advice is solid for a person of any age. I love the lines, "Take it as a lullaby/
Grasp it as a hope/ It is your time to dream .
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Although the picture is of a child, this advice is solid for a person of any age. I love the lines, "Take it as a lullaby/
Grasp it as a hope/ It is your time to dream .
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thank you
