Tanka(dancing ladybugs)
A scene painted for a 4 year old girl21 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tanka about the dancing ladybugs in the garden and a visiting butterfly to complete the fantasy picture. I hope the art connoisseur was content this time with your efforts.
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A very well-written Tanka about the dancing ladybugs in the garden and a visiting butterfly to complete the fantasy picture. I hope the art connoisseur was content this time with your efforts.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from Therese Caron
I love this poem and the picture that goes along with it! I love happy garden for a child, and the idea of dancing ladybugs. I also love the little story you inserted after the poem. Very nice work!
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I love this poem and the picture that goes along with it! I love happy garden for a child, and the idea of dancing ladybugs. I also love the little story you inserted after the poem. Very nice work!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from Hitcher
It sounds like your little four year old friend could be a girl, asking for a flower, butterfly and ladybugs, so cute! I think a little boy might have thrown in a beetle, bee of worm, ha ha. Nice!
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It sounds like your little four year old friend could be a girl, asking for a flower, butterfly and ladybugs, so cute! I think a little boy might have thrown in a beetle, bee of worm, ha ha. Nice!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Dancing Ladybugs, looks good and brings our notice to the many lives that gad about beneath and on the colorful and accommodating garden constituents.
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This tanka, Dancing Ladybugs, looks good and brings our notice to the many lives that gad about beneath and on the colorful and accommodating garden constituents.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from Pantygynt
Since you were working to clear instructions with the picture, I presume the same applies to the Tanka. Your four year old friend probably doesn't know the meaning of 'pivot' and certainly not 'satori'. So the less said about them the better. Lol.
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Since you were working to clear instructions with the picture, I presume the same applies to the Tanka. Your four year old friend probably doesn't know the meaning of 'pivot' and certainly not 'satori'. So the less said about them the better. Lol.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from June Sargent
Well, I'm happy to hear she's happy with this one. The ladybugs are lovely and cheerful. Very uplifting on a cold winter's day here in New England. Keep up the good work - we love your cheerful offerings!
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Well, I'm happy to hear she's happy with this one. The ladybugs are lovely and cheerful. Very uplifting on a cold winter's day here in New England. Keep up the good work - we love your cheerful offerings!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A nice painting and
how wonderful you did
this for this little girl.
-I imagine she would like this.
-I like your tanka with very
good, fanciful imagery, Pam.
-I like how they "hold each
other's hands and feet."
-It is a "happy garden."
-Thanks for sharing.
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-A nice painting and
how wonderful you did
this for this little girl.
-I imagine she would like this.
-I like your tanka with very
good, fanciful imagery, Pam.
-I like how they "hold each
other's hands and feet."
-It is a "happy garden."
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from Sally Law
This is a precious story along with a lovely tanka offering, dear Pam. I am very childlike, so I can always appreciate the eye of a child. My grandchildren are especially talented, just like their mother. You were so sweet to please your little friend with this. :) Truly a happy garden.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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This is a precious story along with a lovely tanka offering, dear Pam. I am very childlike, so I can always appreciate the eye of a child. My grandchildren are especially talented, just like their mother. You were so sweet to please your little friend with this. :) Truly a happy garden.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, dancing ladybugs what a beautiful sight you brought to our eyes here Pam, vibrant words and a fun painting too, much enjoyed . . . love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, dancing ladybugs what a beautiful sight you brought to our eyes here Pam, vibrant words and a fun painting too, much enjoyed . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from royowen
A nice tanka Pam, and even nicer painting for your precious four year old granddaughter, I always that a tanka was 20-25 syllables. Well done and welcome back dear girl, well done, blessings, Roy
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A nice tanka Pam, and even nicer painting for your precious four year old granddaughter, I always that a tanka was 20-25 syllables. Well done and welcome back dear girl, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
