Tanka(dancing ladybugs)
A scene painted for a 4 year old girl21 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Pam,
This is a good ephrastic poem in response to this childlike painting.
I like that you paint on a child's idea.
This is a nicely done tanka.
Keep writing
Joan
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Pam,
This is a good ephrastic poem in response to this childlike painting.
I like that you paint on a child's idea.
This is a nicely done tanka.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Pam. Another fun combination of your art with your poetry. I hope the little girl liked the picture you painted for her. Colors are bright and cheerful. Theme is appropriate. Marilyn
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Hi Pam. Another fun combination of your art with your poetry. I hope the little girl liked the picture you painted for her. Colors are bright and cheerful. Theme is appropriate. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
Comment from rhonnie69
MERRY CHRISTMAS PAM: It's good to hear from you, dear lady. I haven't talked with you for a while now. I'm glad that you are back. Pam...Yes this picture paints a happy garden for a child. I believe that all of your paintings makes all kinds of people happy. I've imagined that that's because you are a happy painter. You already know that I admire your paintings. This painting is good. You are good too. God bless you,Pam. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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MERRY CHRISTMAS PAM: It's good to hear from you, dear lady. I haven't talked with you for a while now. I'm glad that you are back. Pam...Yes this picture paints a happy garden for a child. I believe that all of your paintings makes all kinds of people happy. I've imagined that that's because you are a happy painter. You already know that I admire your paintings. This painting is good. You are good too. God bless you,Pam. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Thank you, rhonnie. You are very sweet. I have had two surgeries since we last spoke. Two more coming up. I have trouble reviewing because I have a serious neck issue that makes it hurt to type. I appreciate your encouraging words. Thanks for the great review
Comment from papa55mike
What a wonderfully written poem and using your own painting, too. There are a couple of other artists that do the same thing on Fanstory. Best of luck with your writing and painting!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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What a wonderfully written poem and using your own painting, too. There are a couple of other artists that do the same thing on Fanstory. Best of luck with your writing and painting!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a well written and fun Tanka that you've penned for a little girl.
The artwork is a wonderful match as well.
Thank you for sharing your art with us.
Sharon
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I think this is a well written and fun Tanka that you've penned for a little girl.
The artwork is a wonderful match as well.
Thank you for sharing your art with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
Comment from amada
I enjoyed reading this nice tanka about the dancing lady bug...nice and sweet for this Christmas time. What great combination for a lovely inspiration; a flower, a flower, and a butterfly. The image stays in this reader's memory. Lovely.
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I enjoyed reading this nice tanka about the dancing lady bug...nice and sweet for this Christmas time. What great combination for a lovely inspiration; a flower, a flower, and a butterfly. The image stays in this reader's memory. Lovely.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
Comment from Janetsue
This is a charming posting that I'm sure found great favor with your little friend. It's wonderful that you are connecting this child with art and poetry at such an early age!
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This is a charming posting that I'm sure found great favor with your little friend. It's wonderful that you are connecting this child with art and poetry at such an early age!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from Bichon
Aww, I really think she will love this one. It has the simplistic and childlike view to it, but also very enjoyable and heartwarming to read. Lovely paining too!
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Aww, I really think she will love this one. It has the simplistic and childlike view to it, but also very enjoyable and heartwarming to read. Lovely paining too!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from Barbaraj1
It's wonderful that you have a five year old friend. You will see things
through her eyes. Great painting. What could be better than dancing
ladybugs, flowers, and a butterfly?
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It's wonderful that you have a five year old friend. You will see things
through her eyes. Great painting. What could be better than dancing
ladybugs, flowers, and a butterfly?
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
Comment from lyenochka
So wonderful that you know your audience - even four-year-old girls! Your painting is lots of fun - with ladybugs entwined in legs and feet and I guess they are safe from the "rust tinged butterfly" - all just enjoy the lovely "blue violet." Happy to see you today, Pamela!
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So wonderful that you know your audience - even four-year-old girls! Your painting is lots of fun - with ladybugs entwined in legs and feet and I guess they are safe from the "rust tinged butterfly" - all just enjoy the lovely "blue violet." Happy to see you today, Pamela!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
