Love of Animals
Viewing comments for Chapter 401 "Here Comes Santa"Eclectic mix
10 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the dogs who wait in anticipation for Santa to bring them their treats because they were on their best behaviour all day long and needs their pay.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the dogs who wait in anticipation for Santa to bring them their treats because they were on their best behaviour all day long and needs their pay.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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I think retail critter treats is big business. I Thanks fir reading and reviewing my poem.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! What a motley crew we have here to accompany your wonderful contest offering, Trisha!! ;) :) It has a wonderful appearance as well as sound with that single word as your first line -- great job and thanx for sharing! :) Good luck! Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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LOL!! What a motley crew we have here to accompany your wonderful contest offering, Trisha!! ;) :) It has a wonderful appearance as well as sound with that single word as your first line -- great job and thanx for sharing! :) Good luck! Yvette
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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I thank you for the positive review,. I?m glad you enjoyed my poem. Animal treat commerce is huge now. Designer and all that.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! This is so true as our spoiled furry kids get all excited over what Santa is going to bring them too :). Mine would always root around under the tree looking for theirs until I decided to get them each a stocking and hang it out of reach (no easy task when I had the five Great Danes). This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a technically sound 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is playful and timely. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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LOL! This is so true as our spoiled furry kids get all excited over what Santa is going to bring them too :). Mine would always root around under the tree looking for theirs until I decided to get them each a stocking and hang it out of reach (no easy task when I had the five Great Danes). This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a technically sound 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is playful and timely. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Dogs are such a pleasure. We have a spaniel which is as quick as a whip . We can?t fool him, if we tell him his treats are all gone, but they are not, he?ll sit and stare at us as if to say ?liars? and won?t move. 5 Great Danes - wow
Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this delightful piece. The poem and the AWESOME artwork are a dynamite combo.
Good choice of a five-syllable word
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this delightful piece. The poem and the AWESOME artwork are a dynamite combo.
Good choice of a five-syllable word
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thanks for your complimentary review, Janice
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from RodG
Can you imagine buying Christmas treats for the menagerie in your photo? We hung and filled a stocking for our dog and loved to watch his reaction upon emptying iron CHRISTMAS morning. He's gone now, so thank you for bring back fond memories. Rod
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Can you imagine buying Christmas treats for the menagerie in your photo? We hung and filled a stocking for our dog and loved to watch his reaction upon emptying iron CHRISTMAS morning. He's gone now, so thank you for bring back fond memories. Rod
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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It?s expensive! It?s a designer doggy treat commercial world now. The memories of our pets are precious , thanks Rod for reading and reviewing my poem
Hugs, Trisha
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Bucketlist. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the 5-7-5 contest entry. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Hello Bucketlist. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the 5-7-5 contest entry. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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You must be the bakers dozen poet! I appreciate your review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha! What a fun entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. With a Christmas theme, and an adorable picture (did you photoshop it? If so, neat work) this is an uplifting post.
Best of luck with the competition judging {smiles}.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Ha, ha! What a fun entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. With a Christmas theme, and an adorable picture (did you photoshop it? If so, neat work) this is an uplifting post.
Best of luck with the competition judging {smiles}.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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No, not my doing,. Thanks for your positive review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
Good luck with the entry. I never see a picture of Santa the way he is in my minds' eye; a jolly old ELF, small and rotund covered head to foot in fur.
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Good luck with the entry. I never see a picture of Santa the way he is in my minds' eye; a jolly old ELF, small and rotund covered head to foot in fur.
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Maybe he only exists in your mind! Grateful for your review as usual
Hugs, Trisha
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So true and thank you.
Rikki
Comment from Dancemom
Santa does have so much popular appeal for people young and old. I love the pictures you chose of Santa with the woodland creatures. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Santa does have so much popular appeal for people young and old. I love the pictures you chose of Santa with the woodland creatures. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thanks very much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These joyous moments in life when we get the chance to bestow gifts on family and friends are truly magical, I love giving at Christmas and I planned my grandchildren's gifts in the summer! Ha ha ha, a joyous write Trisha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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These joyous moments in life when we get the chance to bestow gifts on family and friends are truly magical, I love giving at Christmas and I planned my grandchildren's gifts in the summer! Ha ha ha, a joyous write Trisha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thank you Dolly!
