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Comment from Alex Rosel
Hey, this is a fun and entertaining poem. It's just perfect for this time of year leading up to the Christmas festivities. I particularly like your "Curving swerving to and fro" line. The internal rhyme works well {thumbs up}.
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Hey, this is a fun and entertaining poem. It's just perfect for this time of year leading up to the Christmas festivities. I particularly like your "Curving swerving to and fro" line. The internal rhyme works well {thumbs up}.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, rhonnie69.
-The syllable count,
topic, and rhyme are very good.
-I like the fun you describe
in a vivid word picture of
"Racing through the snow."
-I like your follow up poem, too.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, rhonnie69.
-The syllable count,
topic, and rhyme are very good.
-I like the fun you describe
in a vivid word picture of
"Racing through the snow."
-I like your follow up poem, too.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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MERRY CHRISTMAS PAM: Thank you for your complementing on my poem. you are appreciated. I'm glad that you liked it. It pleases me greatly when my readers like my work. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You are very welcome, rhonnie69, and you have a very Merry Christmas, too!