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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Inextinguishable"Belief
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bucketlist
I see that you used a word, that has to be looked up in a dictionary. Well you did great explain what the format required for a teacup poem.
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hello Bucketlist
I see that you used a word, that has to be looked up in a dictionary. Well you did great explain what the format required for a teacup poem.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
Thanks for reviewing. I also wrote a poem about being glad. I hope you get to read it,
Hugs, Trisha
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Trisha
You are welcome
Gert
Comment from Rikki66
I like it though I do not understand the form well. It seems to me that you followed the rules if I can count syllables.
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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I like it though I do not understand the form well. It seems to me that you followed the rules if I can count syllables.
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Yes. I did. It?s confusing at first, but I like the challenge. Thanks for reading and reviewing
Hugs, Trisha
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Hugs and XX
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Thanks for all your replies. I understand about parents passing. Both passed in December long time apart, but one died and the other
Was cremated on the same day a week before Christmas
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And I think I have Christmas blues. Hugs and xx.
Rikki
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And I think I have Christmas blues. Hugs and xx.
Rikki
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like teacup poems. There is absolutely no fluff to them. I used to like acrostics when the just had one word for each letter. I guess I like to see thoughts sifted and reduced. You have reduced the word inextinguishable to its proper parts. True spiritual beliefs are definitely inextinguishable.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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I like teacup poems. There is absolutely no fluff to them. I used to like acrostics when the just had one word for each letter. I guess I like to see thoughts sifted and reduced. You have reduced the word inextinguishable to its proper parts. True spiritual beliefs are definitely inextinguishable.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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It?s a new tryout style for me.. I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. My hats off to you for attempting such a difficult style of poem. Are you asking a question? Punctuation would clarify the issue.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. My hats off to you for attempting such a difficult style of poem. Are you asking a question? Punctuation would clarify the issue.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thanks for the suggestion, no, no question. I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a good teacup poem. The root word, inextinguishable, is an excellent choice since it carries connotation. And you've picked up on a particularly connotation in your last line {thumbs up}.
Nicely presented!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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This is a good teacup poem. The root word, inextinguishable, is an excellent choice since it carries connotation. And you've picked up on a particularly connotation in your last line {thumbs up}.
Nicely presented!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you Alex, have an blessed day.
Hugs, Trisha