Wilderness Redemption Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Let's Get It On"Shenanigans on the frontier
9 total reviews
Comment from brenda faye curtis
As always, this chapter is as enjoyable as the others I've read. The characters are well-rounded and believable as real people, which makes these chapters easy reading. Looking forward to the next one!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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As always, this chapter is as enjoyable as the others I've read. The characters are well-rounded and believable as real people, which makes these chapters easy reading. Looking forward to the next one!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you for hanging with my book. I'm Glad you're enjoying it.
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I am!
Comment from JudyE
I used to love reading Westerns and I enjoyed reading this. I like the way you've handled the dialogue. I didn't really try to pick up any edits. I just enjoyed the read.
Cheers
Judy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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I used to love reading Westerns and I enjoyed reading this. I like the way you've handled the dialogue. I didn't really try to pick up any edits. I just enjoyed the read.
Cheers
Judy
Comment Written 28-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from Therese Caron
I am new to this site, so I just jumped into this story. It is very artfully written, and very descriptive. When I read a book or story, if I cannot picture the characters, I lose interest. Not here! I will read what I missed. Great writing!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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I am new to this site, so I just jumped into this story. It is very artfully written, and very descriptive. When I read a book or story, if I cannot picture the characters, I lose interest. Not here! I will read what I missed. Great writing!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Welcome to Fanstory. Thank you for the rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from LaRosa
I am enjoying this reflection back into the past. Grandma sure isn't one to cross, is she? Reminds me of someone I knew...
My grandmother homesteaded alone at 16 years of age in the Black Hills of SDakota and grandpa had some colorful stories of his own.
I look forward to keeping up with yours!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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I am enjoying this reflection back into the past. Grandma sure isn't one to cross, is she? Reminds me of someone I knew...
My grandmother homesteaded alone at 16 years of age in the Black Hills of SDakota and grandpa had some colorful stories of his own.
I look forward to keeping up with yours!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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That's a cool story about your grandma, maybe you could share some of the stories with us. Thank you for the rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Earl. I enjoyed the dialect and your use of vernacular in the dialogue. Some people don't like that but I think it adds "flavor" to the conversations. There is one like I really liked: "He's killed more men than smallpox." That's a very powerful statement and it works great. Robert
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Hello Earl. I enjoyed the dialect and your use of vernacular in the dialogue. Some people don't like that but I think it adds "flavor" to the conversations. There is one like I really liked: "He's killed more men than smallpox." That's a very powerful statement and it works great. Robert
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you Robert for the 5 star rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
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You're welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I hope Doo's luck continues facing a brawl with Bear. I like how strong and brave you made the young gals to be. I am impressed with McGraw's vocabulary in Shawnee - good idea to put that conversation in italics.
Spacing issue:
"McGraw
answered."
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Well, I hope Doo's luck continues facing a brawl with Bear. I like how strong and brave you made the young gals to be. I am impressed with McGraw's vocabulary in Shawnee - good idea to put that conversation in italics.
Spacing issue:
"McGraw
answered."
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the rating and the editing tip. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I do believe those frontiersmen would rather fight than eat. It seems they are all out to show everyone how bad they are. LOL Can't wait to see how this fight turns out. Well done Earl. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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I do believe those frontiersmen would rather fight than eat. It seems they are all out to show everyone how bad they are. LOL Can't wait to see how this fight turns out. Well done Earl. Nancy:)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the excellent rating Nancy. I appreciate you sticking with my book and taking taking the time to read my work.
Comment from LaFrance
I enjoy reading your chapters, your characters are well developed and full of life, I'm curious about your new character Bear Roger he sounds like a mean fella.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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I enjoy reading your chapters, your characters are well developed and full of life, I'm curious about your new character Bear Roger he sounds like a mean fella.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the excellent rating. I appreciate you sticking with my book and taking taking the time to read my work.
Comment from aryr
A great continuing chapter Earl. You added several great touches here and there. The idea of mule meat would be repulsive now but in the time of the story, one ate what one could. It would be considered a feast. Richard's attire was indeed laughable, with a red shirt he would probably be shot shortly and definitely the shine on his boots would be mud covered by the end of the day. I do like the details you provided and the narrative notes.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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A great continuing chapter Earl. You added several great touches here and there. The idea of mule meat would be repulsive now but in the time of the story, one ate what one could. It would be considered a feast. Richard's attire was indeed laughable, with a red shirt he would probably be shot shortly and definitely the shine on his boots would be mud covered by the end of the day. I do like the details you provided and the narrative notes.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the excellent rating. I appreciate you sticking with my book and taking taking the time to read my work.
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You are very welcome.
