LOVE OF NATURE
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7 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a structurally sound Four Line Poem with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is so very true as the essence of the holiday has been lost in the overwhelming tide of materialism. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a structurally sound Four Line Poem with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is so very true as the essence of the holiday has been lost in the overwhelming tide of materialism. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
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It?s not a popular angle of Christmas, but from my heart. Thank you so much.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written four-line poem about the focus of Christmas that shifted from remembrance of the birth of Jesus to the wants and greed of a perfect Christmas gift for all.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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A very well-written four-line poem about the focus of Christmas that shifted from remembrance of the birth of Jesus to the wants and greed of a perfect Christmas gift for all.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Yes, too many are celebrating by what to get and miss the real gratitude point
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Four Line Poem contest.
Your short verse has a clear message.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Four Line Poem contest.
Your short verse has a clear message.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks Sharon, your reviews are appreciated.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh yes indeed and you have said it perfectly. It has indeed and that is why I don't go shopping til it is after midnight shopping and not all the rush.
Once
Center of spirit
Now has sadly changed
Into a tangible focus rush
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Oh yes indeed and you have said it perfectly. It has indeed and that is why I don't go shopping til it is after midnight shopping and not all the rush.
Once
Center of spirit
Now has sadly changed
Into a tangible focus rush
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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I think a lot is internet shopping now. At least it?s virtual not fighting physically over tangible things. He is the reason for the season, and
Love isnt materialistic.
I appreciate all your reviews, Barb
Comment from GWHARGIS
I'm with ya. The focus is on the fantastic gift. Family and friends should be above that. Christ's birthday number one. Great job. Great poem. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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I'm with ya. The focus is on the fantastic gift. Family and friends should be above that. Christ's birthday number one. Great job. Great poem. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a potentially successful contest entry. It conveys the clear message that the Christmas season has become too commercialized. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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This is a potentially successful contest entry. It conveys the clear message that the Christmas season has become too commercialized. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thank you I shall! I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Darlene Franklin
If I'm reading this right, you're talking about the mistake of focusing on the urgent (tangible focus rush) vs. focusing on the important (center of being.) A mistake to which we're all prone, I believe. Good luck with t he contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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If I'm reading this right, you're talking about the mistake of focusing on the urgent (tangible focus rush) vs. focusing on the important (center of being.) A mistake to which we're all prone, I believe. Good luck with t he contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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Yes you are correct ,thanks for reviewing kindly
Hugs, Trisha
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You're welcome, Trisha--Darlene