Tanka(ladybugs and deep blue)
Ladybugs dance among violets32 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I'm amazed at how talented you are! Could you please give me some? You art is pure homespun Americana and crowns your short style poem so nicely. Sublime!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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I'm amazed at how talented you are! Could you please give me some? You art is pure homespun Americana and crowns your short style poem so nicely. Sublime!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
Comment from Therese Caron
This is beautiful. I take it by your note that you painted this yourself. That makes this poem even more beautiful.I really liked the image created by the words clap politely. You are extremely talented. Beautiful piece of work.
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This is beautiful. I take it by your note that you painted this yourself. That makes this poem even more beautiful.I really liked the image created by the words clap politely. You are extremely talented. Beautiful piece of work.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Ladybug Dancers, looks good and captures the movements of both beetles and stamen as the quest for reproduction rages.
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This tanka, Ladybug Dancers, looks good and captures the movements of both beetles and stamen as the quest for reproduction rages.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Pam. I adore this painting and the tanka that's goes with it. You have done a lovely job in portraying the dance of wildlife in Nature ~ especially insect dancers. So fun.. Well done.
Melissa
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Hello Pam. I adore this painting and the tanka that's goes with it. You have done a lovely job in portraying the dance of wildlife in Nature ~ especially insect dancers. So fun.. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Pam, another lovely poem in the series 'Nature's Dancers' - lovely idea. Good poem accompanied by one of your own paintings - lovely!
Enjoyed the read - warm regards Dorothy xx
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Hello Pam, another lovely poem in the series 'Nature's Dancers' - lovely idea. Good poem accompanied by one of your own paintings - lovely!
Enjoyed the read - warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork, Pam
-A well written tanka.
-The opening lines are
good with effective imagery
of the violets in the breeze.
-Very good pivot line.
-Very good concluding
lines with the personification.
-I like the image "clap politely."
-Thanks for sharing.
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-Very nice artwork, Pam
-A well written tanka.
-The opening lines are
good with effective imagery
of the violets in the breeze.
-Very good pivot line.
-Very good concluding
lines with the personification.
-I like the image "clap politely."
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I love the words "clap politely." Thanks for teaching me more about lady bugs and cross polinazation. Methinks both t he ladybugs and the violets are dancing in the breeze.
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I love the words "clap politely." Thanks for teaching me more about lady bugs and cross polinazation. Methinks both t he ladybugs and the violets are dancing in the breeze.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
Comment from Alex Rosel
Are the ladybugs or the violets "dancing" in the breeze?
I don't know about the American ladybug, but thinking of the British ladybird, I struggled to visualize them dancing. I suppose a cartoon depiction could conjure such a scene. However, I like the visuals of blooms "dancing" in the breeze.
And I like the simplicity of the image you've chosen to accompany this poem {thumbs up}.
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Are the ladybugs or the violets "dancing" in the breeze?
I don't know about the American ladybug, but thinking of the British ladybird, I struggled to visualize them dancing. I suppose a cartoon depiction could conjure such a scene. However, I like the visuals of blooms "dancing" in the breeze.
And I like the simplicity of the image you've chosen to accompany this poem {thumbs up}.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
Comment from June Sargent
This is my favorite so far in your series! I love ladybugs and their dancing among violets is beautiful! I wonder what song they're dancing to...very clever piece.
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This is my favorite so far in your series! I love ladybugs and their dancing among violets is beautiful! I wonder what song they're dancing to...very clever piece.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
Ladybug Dancers", is short succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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Ladybug Dancers", is short succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
