Tanka(ladybugs and deep blue)
Ladybugs dance among violets32 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
As usual, Pam, I enjoyed reading your poem to accompany your artwork. Such a nice combination. Colors in your painting and the wording in your poem work well together. Marilyn
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As usual, Pam, I enjoyed reading your poem to accompany your artwork. Such a nice combination. Colors in your painting and the wording in your poem work well together. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Interesting little poem. I like the image of your painting, it suits your poem well. Lots of colour in both the image and poem. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
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Interesting little poem. I like the image of your painting, it suits your poem well. Lots of colour in both the image and poem. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
Comment from donette1914
very nice painting
I appreciate how well your words flow with your poem
I felt it was believable and very well penned
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
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very nice painting
I appreciate how well your words flow with your poem
I felt it was believable and very well penned
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
Comment from Joan E.
I relished your parallel artwork and hope the series continues. Your personification of the "violets", "seeds" and "pollen" in this tanka was very effective. Big cheers- Joan
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I relished your parallel artwork and hope the series continues. Your personification of the "violets", "seeds" and "pollen" in this tanka was very effective. Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
Cute way of showing the pollination of flowers, with the help of the wind and the ladybugs. We tried once to buy ladybugs and release them on our rose bushes - but they didn't stay. Too bad.
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Cute way of showing the pollination of flowers, with the help of the wind and the ladybugs. We tried once to buy ladybugs and release them on our rose bushes - but they didn't stay. Too bad.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
Comment from Sherry Asbury2
Love this piece of beauty. Ladybugs are very special to me and violets are a favorite flower--put them together and ... magic! You make fantastic imagery with the pollen clapping politely and then flying off to make more flowers. Very sweet and well-done
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Love this piece of beauty. Ladybugs are very special to me and violets are a favorite flower--put them together and ... magic! You make fantastic imagery with the pollen clapping politely and then flying off to make more flowers. Very sweet and well-done
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
Comment from Sanku
Very pretty picture capturing the rhythm of nature .The wind making the violets and the insects dance.personification also is interesting -seeds clapping and pollens searching fora mate
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Very pretty picture capturing the rhythm of nature .The wind making the violets and the insects dance.personification also is interesting -seeds clapping and pollens searching fora mate
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your tanka is skillfully-written and delightful. Through lively use of personification, you have presented a lovely scenario in which nature's
elements regale each other.
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Your tanka is skillfully-written and delightful. Through lively use of personification, you have presented a lovely scenario in which nature's
elements regale each other.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
Yep, I can see this even without your most beautiful painting. I would've pictured it differently, but I get a charge out of the two ladybirds watching this whole thing play out.
The pollen clapping politely waiting to release its scent to allure a mate is quite an inspired satori from the poet.
Great job, Pam and as always good to see you again. :)
Gloria
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Yep, I can see this even without your most beautiful painting. I would've pictured it differently, but I get a charge out of the two ladybirds watching this whole thing play out.
The pollen clapping politely waiting to release its scent to allure a mate is quite an inspired satori from the poet.
Great job, Pam and as always good to see you again. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
Comment from Boogienights
It never ceases to amaze me, how beautiful your paintings are. Your poems complement them and tell the story. Thank you for sharing. I hope you keep up with your artwork.
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It never ceases to amaze me, how beautiful your paintings are. Your poems complement them and tell the story. Thank you for sharing. I hope you keep up with your artwork.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
