Passion
prose coupled with a 5-7-56 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A great prose as you explain the meaning of passion and its feelings within. I find the word passion can be related to the word compassion. Compassion means sympathizing with other people; a feeling which we all have when writing. Passion is a love for writing.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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A great prose as you explain the meaning of passion and its feelings within. I find the word passion can be related to the word compassion. Compassion means sympathizing with other people; a feeling which we all have when writing. Passion is a love for writing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi! I don't play word construction. I utilizing the true meaning of a word through the definition(s). Compassion means sympathy. Passion is feeling or emotion and another word for love. Here is a link to the definition -https://www.rhymezone.com/r/rhyme.cgi?Word=passion&org1=syl&org2=l&org3=y&typeofrhyme=def
Thank you :)
Comment from Supe
Very interesting message here with all the different feelings that passion brings. I enjoyed this and the artwork complements. Your 5-7-5 at the end completed the poetry. Good luck in the contest. Nice job.
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Very interesting message here with all the different feelings that passion brings. I enjoyed this and the artwork complements. Your 5-7-5 at the end completed the poetry. Good luck in the contest. Nice job.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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You're nice. Thank you :)
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you are welcome.
Comment from Joan E.
What an eyecatching artwork! And I liked your idea of combining prose and a 5-7-5 --rather like a haibun. Thank you for reminding us to "Live passionately". Big cheers and best wishes in the competition- Joan
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What an eyecatching artwork! And I liked your idea of combining prose and a 5-7-5 --rather like a haibun. Thank you for reminding us to "Live passionately". Big cheers and best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Joan! I think haibun is like mainly for travel journaling. And this topic was love. You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
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My understanding is that the range of haibun is broad and often includes autobiography and travel journaling. Haibun or not, I admired your love theme. Smiles- Joan
Comment from BeasPeas
Sorry not to have a sixer for you. I think you've explained love/passion very well, especially here:
"Passion is that feeling that gives me a new perspective as it takes life from being basic and boring into an experience. I don't have to do something. I would like to do something. And that something brings enjoyment when I am doing it. Maybe, it gives enjoyment too. It does all add to the experience."
Passion drives us to continue to seek to know more about something. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Sorry not to have a sixer for you. I think you've explained love/passion very well, especially here:
"Passion is that feeling that gives me a new perspective as it takes life from being basic and boring into an experience. I don't have to do something. I would like to do something. And that something brings enjoyment when I am doing it. Maybe, it gives enjoyment too. It does all add to the experience."
Passion drives us to continue to seek to know more about something. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Marilyn! You're the best. Don't worry about the stars. The review was great like your heart. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem contest.
This verse describes passion in it's many forms.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem contest.
This verse describes passion in it's many forms.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Sharon! Thank you. Have a nice day :)
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this poem that expresses passion in a broad view that can carry into any healthy activity. That is the best way to live life with a good attitude that carries over to others.
Bill
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Great job with this poem that expresses passion in a broad view that can carry into any healthy activity. That is the best way to live life with a good attitude that carries over to others.
Bill
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Bill! Thanks again. God bless you :)