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NAB Your Dreams

Motivational 2-4-2

23 total reviews 
Comment from Michael McCottry Bell Jr
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Very unique 2-4-2 entry a worthy final contestant. I like the image that goes along with the piece. It is so true the message that you are truly converting. Keep up the great work as always


Michael

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
    Thank you.
Comment from Bucketlist
Exceptional
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This is very artistic and a lovely presentation. The rose
animation really silently enhanced the theme. Congratulations on 3rd place. Thanks for sharing this awesome poem.
Hugs, Trisha

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
    Thank you for the lovely words of encouragement and support. I am so pleased you enjoyed it and found it to be a worthy contest contribution. Your time and kind feedback are greatly valued and appreciated.
reply by Bucketlist on 09-Dec-2019
Comment from Joan E.
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Congratulations on having your 2-4-2 Poem well received in the contest. I enjoyed the analogy between "aspirations" and the bearing of fruit. Your animation reinforced that special image. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
    Thank you for the lovely words of encouragement and support. I am so pleased you enjoyed it and found it to be a worthy contest contribution. Your time and kind feedback are greatly valued and appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about nurturing your dreams and aspirations will deliver the fruit or results you required for your life to be satisfactory.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Sandra. Your kindness is uplifting as is your kind feedback.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-4-2, Nab YourDreams, has the right set up and reminds the readers that a goal is better achieved when it is always in front of us and in tensions for success are clear.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
    Thank you very much for the lovely words of encouragement and support. I am pleased you enjoyed it and always appreciative of your time and generous feedback.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello M. Your poem certainly meets all of the stated criteria for the style of a 2 - 4 - 2 poem. The content of the poem is quite good. It manages to tell a story in eight syllables. Z

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
    Thank you very much for the lovely words of encouragement and support, Z. I am pleased you enjoyed it and always appreciative of your time and generous feedback.
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 28-Nov-2019
    You are welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice images and
presentation, Monica.
-The syllable count is good,
and use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-A good topic and
message about reaching
our aspirations.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you very much for the kind and uplifting feedback, Pam. It is truly valued and appreciated.
reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Nov-2019
    You are very welcome and deserving!
Comment from aryr
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Good luck in the contest. I really enjoyed this, it was short, direct and to the point. But it was also true. I liked the picture and the colors used. The rose was a great touch.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you very much for the kind and uplifting feedback. It is truly valued and appreciated.
Comment from Sally Law
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Fantastic entry for the contest, dear Amgel. I love the little image sitting in the moonlight, and the graphics enhancing your fine poem. Stellar!
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest.
Sally xo

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you very much for the kind and uplifting feedback, Sally. It is truly valued and appreciated.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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Perfect syllable count. I like the graphic animation. A gentle reminder that all goals take work. I think you did a good job with this. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you very much for the kind and uplifting feedback. It is truly valued and appreciated.