Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "Politics King?"Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is a respectable contest entry with an internal and an ending rhyme. I admit to being a never Trumper so the message resonated with me. Love the picture.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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This poem is a respectable contest entry with an internal and an ending rhyme. I admit to being a never Trumper so the message resonated with me. Love the picture.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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I Thank you for your review and positive encouragement. I will recount the syllables to ensure it meets the mark. Blessings to you for your Valued Support.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Not sure about this one - although I like the message.
Are you rhyming self with self? That would generally be considered a no-no... Oh, OK, I see you have another rhyme right at the beginning of the line with born/torn.
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Not sure about this one - although I like the message.
Are you rhyming self with self? That would generally be considered a no-no... Oh, OK, I see you have another rhyme right at the beginning of the line with born/torn.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the review and support. I will review and revise based on the Suggestions. Blessings to you.