Heavenly Sight-Seeing
Get outside tonight** and enjoy!!12 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you, mystery poet. I missed the meteor shower display as it was raining here the other night.
{Double sigh.} It's raining in many ways and it would be good for me to watch it on line today. Thank you for the blessing you are.
Sending you my best today as, and for the Essence Poetry Contest.
Sally xo
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thank you, mystery poet. I missed the meteor shower display as it was raining here the other night.
{Double sigh.} It's raining in many ways and it would be good for me to watch it on line today. Thank you for the blessing you are.
Sending you my best today as, and for the Essence Poetry Contest.
Sally xo
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for the review on this one, Lady Sal -- not sure you'd have a lot to enjoy as they are sometimes a bit difficult to spot... :/ :/ Take care of you!
Comment from Therese Caron
Beautiful essence poem and the image is gorgeous. I enjoy trying my hand at essence poetry, just to see what I can come up with. It's tricky but fun. You did a beautiful job on this one! Both the words and the picture are lovely.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Beautiful essence poem and the image is gorgeous. I enjoy trying my hand at essence poetry, just to see what I can come up with. It's tricky but fun. You did a beautiful job on this one! Both the words and the picture are lovely.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thank you for stopping by, Therese - so glad you enjoyed my essence poem! Be sure to try to get out tonight and watch some race cars of your own!
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I live in upstate New York, and when the sky is clear you can see every single star. It?s absolutely beautiful. People think upstate New York means Albany. I live close to Canada. We have already had plenty of snow and it?s cold. We have the most beautiful skies when clear!
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And the cooling/cold weather just makes it all the clearer, does it not?! ;) Enjoy the skies, my friend! ;)
Comment from Eleanor Frances (Elf)
This is a very good essence poem. The syllabic format is correct. I really like the artwork, too. It works perfectly with the poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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This is a very good essence poem. The syllabic format is correct. I really like the artwork, too. It works perfectly with the poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thanks much for your review, Elf!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Essence Poetry contest.
Falling stars could indeed be God's race cars, with a little imagination.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Essence Poetry contest.
Falling stars could indeed be God's race cars, with a little imagination.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for this awesome review, Sharon -- be sure to get out tonight and watch some race cars!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-Notes are appreciated.
-You have written a
good essence poem
that meets all the requirements.
-The imagery is effective
and paints a good word
picture of looking up at the stars.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-Notes are appreciated.
-You have written a
good essence poem
that meets all the requirements.
-The imagery is effective
and paints a good word
picture of looking up at the stars.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review, Pam!!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written essence poem about the night skies that shows the shooting stars one by one racing through the sky like racing cars. It is always an amazing sight to see.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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A very well-written essence poem about the night skies that shows the shooting stars one by one racing through the sky like racing cars. It is always an amazing sight to see.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your review.... be sure to get out tonight or the next few nights to enjoy!
Comment from oliver818
This is a beautiful little poem, I love the imagery you chose to describe the meteor shower, it works so well. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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This is a beautiful little poem, I love the imagery you chose to describe the meteor shower, it works so well. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your two lines tell a nice poem story. Your selected artwork is a good combo for the same. With poetic license, I easily can accept your internal rhyme for down and around (-;
Summertime is a great time to sit and watch the stars race through the sky, especially during a meteor shower.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Your two lines tell a nice poem story. Your selected artwork is a good combo for the same. With poetic license, I easily can accept your internal rhyme for down and around (-;
Summertime is a great time to sit and watch the stars race through the sky, especially during a meteor shower.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This certainly qualifies as an essence poem in terms of syllable count and internal and ending rhymes. The picture is a striking complement to the words. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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This certainly qualifies as an essence poem in terms of syllable count and internal and ending rhymes. The picture is a striking complement to the words. Keep writing.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thanks much for your review.
Comment from starkat
Nice visuals and metaphor in this well written essence poem. Creative and imaginative to see the shooting stars as God's race cars. Wonderful artwork and presentation. This is an excellent essence poem and should do well in this contest.
Cheers ... ;o)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Nice visuals and metaphor in this well written essence poem. Creative and imaginative to see the shooting stars as God's race cars. Wonderful artwork and presentation. This is an excellent essence poem and should do well in this contest.
Cheers ... ;o)
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thanks so very much for your review!
