I will Continue
An Essence Poem10 total reviews
Comment from Eleanor Frances (Elf)
This is wonderful advice. We all should take heed not to run away from problems but face them to prove ourselves. I love your color scheme and artwork. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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This is wonderful advice. We all should take heed not to run away from problems but face them to prove ourselves. I love your color scheme and artwork. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much, had to change this to fit the prompts requirements, glad to hear the message is still there
Comment from dragonpoet
Nicely done essence poem about being strong and being yourself. Not letting anyone tell you who you should be.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Nicely done essence poem about being strong and being yourself. Not letting anyone tell you who you should be.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
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You're very wlecome.
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written essence poem if we have no need to fear and flee from anyone we are free to feel like somebody who can be free and no one can stop him to be himself.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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A very well-written essence poem if we have no need to fear and flee from anyone we are free to feel like somebody who can be free and no one can stop him to be himself.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Essence Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse has a good story in just a few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Essence Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse has a good story in just a few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Darlene Franklin
From being purposeless to having purpose, you definitely feel like someone. This is a good essence to grasp hold of. Good luck with your contest entry.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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From being purposeless to having purpose, you definitely feel like someone. This is a good essence to grasp hold of. Good luck with your contest entry.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
From being purposeless to having purpose, you definitely feel like someone. This is a good essence to grasp hold of. Good luck with your contest entry.
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From being purposeless to having purpose, you definitely feel like someone. This is a good essence to grasp hold of. Good luck with your contest entry.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
Comment from Raul1
This is a very inspiring poem. It keeps me inspired to believe in myself. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job. Good luck in the contest! I like it.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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This is a very inspiring poem. It keeps me inspired to believe in myself. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job. Good luck in the contest! I like it.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sallyo
Power to the person, in other words. Pity this feeling isn't available to everyone. There's a lot of nonsense about facing your fears. Its often better to stay well clear!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Power to the person, in other words. Pity this feeling isn't available to everyone. There's a lot of nonsense about facing your fears. Its often better to stay well clear!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from PLAIN1
So cool, it seemed like you went from an encounter with the nothing to see here to an encounter with the all inclusiveness of being. These are very thoughtful words...Good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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So cool, it seemed like you went from an encounter with the nothing to see here to an encounter with the all inclusiveness of being. These are very thoughtful words...Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from oliver818
I really like this poem. The contrast between feeling and fleeing and someone and nobody is wonderful. It's so simple yet so deep which is why I guess it's en essence poem. Thanks for sharing this and have great day.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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I really like this poem. The contrast between feeling and fleeing and someone and nobody is wonderful. It's so simple yet so deep which is why I guess it's en essence poem. Thanks for sharing this and have great day.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Wow! Thank you for this encouraging and wonderful review