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Comment from judiverse
I'm glad you chose something from a FanArtReview artist. I try to whenever I can find something appropriate. That is a great owl. Why would you lie to an owl? You know they're so wise they'll find you out in the long run. judi
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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I'm glad you chose something from a FanArtReview artist. I try to whenever I can find something appropriate. That is a great owl. Why would you lie to an owl? You know they're so wise they'll find you out in the long run. judi
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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I did it on a dare.
Comment from nomi338
I certainly hope that you remember to wipe away the remnants of that omelet from around your mouth before you answer. Also, remember t dispose of the tell tale egg shells that expose you as a greedy liar.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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I certainly hope that you remember to wipe away the remnants of that omelet from around your mouth before you answer. Also, remember t dispose of the tell tale egg shells that expose you as a greedy liar.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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One actually has to immediately run away, as you are never believed.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned about lying to the Owls. You used very cute imagery from the art work you chose and very cute words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned about lying to the Owls. You used very cute imagery from the art work you chose and very cute words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You deliver a well penned and technically sound 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is simple, yet leaves the reader wondering if those eggs suffered an untimely poaching. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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You deliver a well penned and technically sound 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is simple, yet leaves the reader wondering if those eggs suffered an untimely poaching. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Can you say, Owlmelette?
Comment from Earl Corp
How do barn owl eggs taste? Are they smaller than chicken eggs? Aren't owls wise enough to know when you're lying to them? I'd think so.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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How do barn owl eggs taste? Are they smaller than chicken eggs? Aren't owls wise enough to know when you're lying to them? I'd think so.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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You can?t get anything by them at night, but during the day they?re mostly out of it.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, no! What did you do to the barn owl's eggs, Bill? Poor barn owl. It's a gorgeous owl but it's not a barn owl unless Bluto Bird stole the barn owl's eggs.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Oh, no! What did you do to the barn owl's eggs, Bill? Poor barn owl. It's a gorgeous owl but it's not a barn owl unless Bluto Bird stole the barn owl's eggs.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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I?m not at liberty to say one way or the other. Thank you for acknowledging that an investigation has been started. : )
Comment from Sallyo
I suppose I ought to know the Lord of the Pink Rabbit Planet is going to puzzle me every time. Yet still I come, and pit my pitiful understanding against your complex verse.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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I suppose I ought to know the Lord of the Pink Rabbit Planet is going to puzzle me every time. Yet still I come, and pit my pitiful understanding against your complex verse.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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You are so kind to check this out, Sallyo. There is no deep meaning here though. Bill
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I like it. Lying to owls is a good skill I guess if you have to hide their eggs. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Nice poem, I like it. Lying to owls is a good skill I guess if you have to hide their eggs. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Oliver. I often point to squirrels when owls ask WHO.