Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Bill, I'm so sorry I missed this one...you are toooooo funny my sweet friend...the picture looks like my sister and I...LOL...never a doubt you would win...I love your poems...I laugh for days later after I read them...CONGRATULATIONS...you...is great to read you again...
love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019

Hello Linda,

Thanks for dropping by and a extra thanks for all those shiny stars, I really appreciate it. And, thanks for all the nice things you said in your review.

Maybe with winter sitting in I'll try to start writing more. I hope you do too.

Take care my good friend...Bill

reply by l.raven on 23-Nov-2019

your soooooo very welcome you...I always say Bill I am going to start writing...and something comes up...LOL...but I hope to as well...

you take care as well my good buddy...xxoo love

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I missed this one! Is that a photo of you and your twin? I just love the outfit, boyfriend! LOL. Congratulations on winning the contest, it truly is a funny one, the last line had me in stitches, you really deserved the ribbon. Where will you put it? Behind your ear or on your lovely frock? LOL. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Well, hello girlfriend. Yes, that's me on the left. You don't think my dress is to short do you? I know how those horny men stare at a babe like me.

Yes, I have this charming gayish, I'm sorry, I meant grayish full-length frock that I'm going to pin it on. After the sex-operation, I'm now a full chested gal and this beautiful red ribbon will really make them stand out. Hey, if you've got it, flaunt it...

Take care girlfriend. Oh, I've also changed my name from Bill to "Billie." LOL...Cheers...

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

LOL - that's some feisty lady. I loved the image you chose and your words really go well with it. Love that they're drinking, they're probably getting sloshed. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thanks Lou for dropping by, I appreciate your excellent review and for thinking I was a young guy. I change my profile picture now and then in case somebody is looking for me...LOL

Take care Lou...Have a great day...Bill

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I needed a good laugh, especially among the gals! I certainly did not expect your punchline, but it was choice particularly since I've been married for 48 years. It is obvious why your poem won the contest--well done! Still chortling- Joan

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019

Thank you very much Joan for dropping by, I appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it.

My wife and I have been together 52 years this month. You don't think she's planning something sneaky for me, do you? LOL

Have a wonderful weekend Joan...Bill

reply by Joan E. on 16-Nov-2019

You may be younger, but you've been married longer! Happy anniversary with nothing sneaky in the bargain- Joan

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This humorous 5-7-5, How's Your Marriage?, has the right set up and finds humor in the passing lasting of that other half of the better half.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019

Thanks Bill for your funny review, I appreciate it. LOL

Have a great weekend, my friend...Bill

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is a riot, mystery poet. It sounds like a few of my cynical relationships. Who doesn't have a few of those to pick from? The art is great fun, too.

Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the humorous poetry race. ;)
Sally Law xo

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019

Hello Sal,

Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Writing humorous poems seems to help me get through a lot of rough days at times.

Have a great day, my friend...

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hah!
This offering is a hoot! I can just imagine two "sisters" and/or ladies of a certain age having this conversation. I laughed aloud when I read your well-crafted poem!

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019

Thank you, Diane. I appreciate your excellent review very much. I'm glad it made you laugh.

Have a great day...

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

That is an excellent humorous poem. Thanks for sharing your creativity and wittiness in this form. Good luck in the contest and good luck if you're married.
Bill

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019

Thank you, Bill, I appreciate your excellent review. My wife and I have been together 52 years this month. That's what prompted this prompt...LOL...Have a nice day, my friend.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Yeah, some of us men are hard to kill. My wife is still trying. This poem is wonderfully written and I love the picture.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019

Thanks Mike for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day also, my friend...