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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great Retourne Trisha, and this topic very apt with Remembrance Day/Veterans Day recently celebrated. Really enjoyed your final dramatic verse, and each of your repeat lines work well.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Great Retourne Trisha, and this topic very apt with Remembrance Day/Veterans Day recently celebrated. Really enjoyed your final dramatic verse, and each of your repeat lines work well.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your kind review.valda,
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Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
War always takes the best of us; leaving the rest to struggle on.
Rikki*********************************************************************************************************************
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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War always takes the best of us; leaving the rest to struggle on.
Rikki*********************************************************************************************************************
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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?Tis too true. I adore you back
Hugs, Trisha
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hugs and kisses.
rikki
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Thanks that?s ice
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Nice I am.
Rikki
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To me you are nice, thank you
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Aw, you're like sugar.
Rikki
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The grown up world of death comes too soon for these young soldiers and in the First World War some were barely 18 years old, such a tragic indictment on society Trisha, I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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The grown up world of death comes too soon for these young soldiers and in the First World War some were barely 18 years old, such a tragic indictment on society Trisha, I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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It is and all because of ego, provocation and greed. The number of Veterans here who return (if lucky) commuting suicide in the VA Hospital PARKING LOTs is increasing.
Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an interesting poem which introduced me to a new format. I like the repetition of the lines in the first verse. It works well throughout the poem. The picture is a good addition, although it does not relate specifically to the message.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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This is an interesting poem which introduced me to a new format. I like the repetition of the lines in the first verse. It works well throughout the poem. The picture is a good addition, although it does not relate specifically to the message.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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Your opinion is well accepted, my thought was the missing members who cannot return. I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Retourne about the devastation of war that never have good end results. Many lives are lost and the rest of the soldiers are physically or mentally scarred for the rest of their lives.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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A very well-written Retourne about the devastation of war that never have good end results. Many lives are lost and the rest of the soldiers are physically or mentally scarred for the rest of their lives.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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Thank very much for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
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Thank very much for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
You did well with this retourne, written well and also tells us of the young lives lost before they were really lived. You worked the repeating lines in very well. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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You did well with this retourne, written well and also tells us of the young lives lost before they were really lived. You worked the repeating lines in very well. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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Thank you!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this poem written in the unique style. You definitely convey a clear message with sympathy for the lives and relationships lost in war. Thanks for sharing your creativity. Bill
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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Great job with this poem written in the unique style. You definitely convey a clear message with sympathy for the lives and relationships lost in war. Thanks for sharing your creativity. Bill
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Bill. The problem also extends into intimate relationships.its like a war within a war. I appreciate your great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You met the Club Challenge splendidly by delivering a powerfully stirring Retourne Poem. I thoroughly enjoyed the artful use of imagery used to create a wave of lingering despair as you evoke the emotions of wasteful loss in the reader. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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You met the Club Challenge splendidly by delivering a powerfully stirring Retourne Poem. I thoroughly enjoyed the artful use of imagery used to create a wave of lingering despair as you evoke the emotions of wasteful loss in the reader. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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I appreciate your wonderfull review!
Hugs,Trisha