Family Name: Charboneau
A tribute to the Lewis and Clark Expedition30 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
I love your acrostic, Lobber. It holds such meaning for you and your sister, and we get to share in your pride. It is good that we writers share who we are. Your family is lucky to have you in their midst.
The story of Lewis and Clark is one of America's best. You and your sister should do more to pass their legend along.
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I love your acrostic, Lobber. It holds such meaning for you and your sister, and we get to share in your pride. It is good that we writers share who we are. Your family is lucky to have you in their midst.
The story of Lewis and Clark is one of America's best. You and your sister should do more to pass their legend along.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
Comment from papa55mike
What a wonderfully written poem with a history to go with it. I love how you set up the first letters in the poem, most people don't think of that.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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What a wonderfully written poem with a history to go with it. I love how you set up the first letters in the poem, most people don't think of that.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever historic acrostic and I adored the sentiments, rhymes and the whole presentation is well executed, much enjoyed, luck to you with the contest, love Dolly x
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This is a clever historic acrostic and I adored the sentiments, rhymes and the whole presentation is well executed, much enjoyed, luck to you with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a very well done acrostic poem that simultaneously is very informative and the art is beyond good. The bonus is additional information in the author's notes. Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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This is a very well done acrostic poem that simultaneously is very informative and the art is beyond good. The bonus is additional information in the author's notes. Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Hi,
Yes, the art is kinda neat. Oh, the poem?s not bad too. My Sister and I thank you for your kind comments. Glad you enjoyed the read. - Lobber
Comment from Rmocruz
I find this poem to be a cleverly constructed acrostic, presenting an important historical event in our nation's past. The visual art does well
to compliment this well written contest entry.
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I find this poem to be a cleverly constructed acrostic, presenting an important historical event in our nation's past. The visual art does well
to compliment this well written contest entry.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your acrostic is very well-written and informative. It flows smoothly along
and reads naturally; no lines sound forced. Not all heroes are widely known and, therefore, are not properly appreciated. Your poem pays tribute to such a person.
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Your acrostic is very well-written and informative. It flows smoothly along
and reads naturally; no lines sound forced. Not all heroes are widely known and, therefore, are not properly appreciated. Your poem pays tribute to such a person.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
Very nice acrostic poem - and an interesting subject. There were big events that took place there at Champoeg for example. It was considered a good place to meet.
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Very nice acrostic poem - and an interesting subject. There were big events that took place there at Champoeg for example. It was considered a good place to meet.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
Comment from Patty Palmer
This was an interesting read! The poem had some rhyme, mostly internal, and jumped out at you. (pleasantly I might add) Interesting reading about your ancestors.
God bless!
Patty
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This was an interesting read! The poem had some rhyme, mostly internal, and jumped out at you. (pleasantly I might add) Interesting reading about your ancestors.
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi LOBBER,
This is a very interesting Acrostic poem. It is well presented with a good flow. I am not American so know very little about your history but this was interesting. I will look it up and have a read.
Thank you for sharing this, and good luck in the contest.
Brenda.x
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Hi LOBBER,
This is a very interesting Acrostic poem. It is well presented with a good flow. I am not American so know very little about your history but this was interesting. I will look it up and have a read.
Thank you for sharing this, and good luck in the contest.
Brenda.x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is an excellent acrostic contest entry. You picked an interesting
subject and threw in some history. I wish you good luck in the contest.
A job well done.
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This is an excellent acrostic contest entry. You picked an interesting
subject and threw in some history. I wish you good luck in the contest.
A job well done.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
